|Reviews for You Make Me Want to Live|
| Phosphorescent chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Wonderful! Once again, you have Booth and Bones, and well... everyone in character. Your writing flows naturally and you include just enough background details (such as the man with the dog and the frisbee) to make the story utterly believable.
| JadedOne47 chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
just.. WOW.. this was awesome.. I really loved it. You're writing is beautiful and i could picture it all. Well done and keep it up. :-)
| somethingcreative09 chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
"Brennan is weighing her need for immediate sexual gratification against the fact that sand really does get into everything"
I LOVE that line
| cherisheachother chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
This was amazing!
| Autumn Dae chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
Wow, this was very well done-one of the most realistically written fics I've ever seen in the Bones fandom. Well done!
| hopelessromantic549 chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
yes yes YES. this is the perfect way to bring them together!
"That's a good idea." She looks up at Booth. "Yes. I would definitely like to have sex with you now."
lol. she WOULD
| hrhdana chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
now thats s good story.
i like that booth came to the beach, but made bren work for it.
| Something Witty Goes Here chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
| A Fanfiction Angel chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
That was just *sniffs* so so perfect. Really touching and beautifully written. Just...just spectacular.
From A Fanfiction Angel
| Not An Infant chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
| Choebs chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
This was quite an excellent and funny read.
You got Booth's humor down to a T. I about lost it with the shoes becoming crabs'condos. LOL.
Also, Brennan, fleeing again. So like her.
It was definitely very Bones like. The characters, the situation, how they handled everything and the setting.
I enjoyed this fic A LOT!
And how cute...they walk off into the sunset together. AW. ;)
Definitely two thumbs up!
| ilovemclife chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
aw so cute! loved it great job
| AnGeLbAbS81 chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
Ayiana, I love your "Bones" fanfics! Keep up the awesome work! Miss you on Yahoo! Messenger!
| MonkeyFighter chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
aww the end was so cute! i was a little confused: did booth turn down the promotion before brennan knew about it?
anyways great story!
| bb-4ever chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
excellent shot. so glad he knows where to find her, and glad she's admitted she wanted him to stay great ending. look forward to more soon