Reviews for Running
Halunygin chapter 6 . 6/28/2013
Toddler Harry is SO cute!
Love this
John chapter 4 . 5/18/2013
I like how you haven't over done it- you haven't made Harry seem incapable of rational thought or actions.
anonymous chapter 9 . 5/13/2013
Please don't mark something as complete if it's not. It's frustrating for readers.
Midnight Venom chapter 5 . 5/13/2013
It was really going well until the name change to Jamie... I have a personal aversion to name changes. It was a really good story, though.
jeanette9a chapter 9 . 5/10/2013
can you please pm me when this one is moved.
jules3677 chapter 8 . 5/10/2013
Interesting. Sort of like "Harry is deaged" fics. Liked very young Harry. Congrats on being able to write baby talk. Great read, Thankyou.
Tenebris Domina chapter 9 . 4/19/2013
Please do continue this story/ fic!

It really is awesome!
sixea chapter 5 . 4/13/2013
You keep calllng harry jamie im so confused
izfan26 chapter 2 . 4/7/2013
pull 'em reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeell geewwdzz.
sevvyboy1fangirl chapter 4 . 3/18/2013
I LOVE this story! its great! im hyperventilating in happiness as i read this:) great job keep up the good work -
Griffin Raven chapter 9 . 1/23/2013
I've been throughly enjoying this story though I do feel sad that this brilliant story wasn't longer. Though I do have a question in regards to the author's note about plans to
remove this story & others for them to be reposted on "hpbrat2"...but I would like to know just where I can locate this particular site or if there are any links to this site
on your home page?

I particularly loved the way that Severus dealt with learning the "real truth" about young
Harry & how he was able to push aside his own previous preconceived perceptions in regards
to Harry. How Severus was able to offer Harry cmfort despite not having been given much
of that himself or having given it to others either? Though I did love the way that he
handle the whole issue of informing Minerva, Poppy & Albus about Harry's physical &
emotional condition because of the child abuse, neglect that he'd suffered at the hands
of his muggle relatives the Dursleys! Just why did Albus place blocks upon Harry's
magic at 8yrs old & why didn't he remove them once he started Hogwarts...or more likely
didn't the lemon-sucking old meddler remove them? You'd have thought that Albus might
have actually "wanted" Harry to not survive when he finally defeated Voldemort for good
...or did Albus have some other plans? If Harry's already defeated Voldemort & thus has
fulfilled the so-called prophecy then just why does Albus seem so intent upon remaining
in control of Harry?

It would be interesting to see just what Severus as "Jamie" new daddy & guardian might
learn upon there visit to Gringotts but also just what Griphook might tell Severus?
Has there been any other irregularities in regards to "Jamie's" inheritance...or will
that information perhaps explain why Albus Dumbledore seems so set on maintaining control
of the boy? How will Severus, godfather Remus, Nana Amelia along with other useful
allies be able to keep Dumbledore from any further meddling & thus allow "Jamie" to
finally enjoy a normal childhood this time? Just what charges will Auror Kingsley
Shacklebolt & Madame Amelia Bones attempt to level against Albus Dumbledore...and will
Severus & his allies be able to keep the news of what's happened to Harry Potter & the
appearance of his son "Jamie" from the press particularly from that newspaper hack Rita

I'm definitely putting this story on my list favorites!
Guest chapter 9 . 1/1/2013
Way to go!
Janet chapter 2 . 1/1/2013
Cool! About time.
Mya chapter 9 . 12/19/2012
I honestly don't care if you add more to it, I thought it was brilliant! The story at the beginning nearly made me cry and the ending was nice. I thought Harry/Sebastian's baby talk was so cute! I like the nice Severus so I won't harp on his demeanor at all. I thought that Albums was being quite the ignoramus, Minerva wasn't as bad. I like how it all played out and how Ginny was accepting of Severus. Well good day!
potterfan2006 chapter 9 . 10/9/2012
I love reading this so far! though I am at a bit of a loss is there more to this now? Please let me know i want to know what happens!
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