|Reviews for Heir To The Four Founders|
| KatherineYirana chapter 7 . 1/19
Great plot. Horrible writing.
| there.is.always.a.rainbow chapter 20 . 12/14/2013
So I'm reading, and laughing at the prank of December 14th. Then I chuckle a bit, because it's currently December while I read this. Then I look at the calendar and realize it is Saturday December 14th, and if that isn't fate, I don't know what it. Also your story is lovely, and I enjoy the Blaise-luna side-relationship... If I were Harry and Ginny I would have hidden from everyone, and run from mrs Weasley like a bat out of hell xD
| lollipoprocks221 chapter 2 . 7/29/2013
I think the story is great so far and the interlude thing was really helpful but what happend with malfoy and zabini how come they're there ? That really confused me but so far the story seems interesting
| Guest chapter 23 . 7/12/2013
loved this chapter
| PansyParkinslut chapter 43 . 2/12/2013
Hmm, does that mean she can switch from one form to another? That would be a rather interesting twist
| Soccerchic30 chapter 32 . 9/9/2012
This is the best harry potter fanfic i've come across. Great work! The incantation for legilimancy is correct. Snape uses it in one of the movies. Agian, this is a great fanfic and definitely made it into my bookmarks.
| BiscuitCultist chapter 24 . 8/13/2012
Actually, the spell that Flitwick was talking about was Wingardium Leviosa so Ron must have said Leviofa to get the buffalo.
| Guest chapter 59 . 7/1/2012
so good still so good
| Guest chapter 36 . 6/30/2012
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH SOOOOOOOO WEIRD AND SWEET AND DID I SAY WERID AAAAHHHH!
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/27/2012
This chap. was so saaaaad '(
| ASTRONOMlC chapter 59 . 2/16/2012
Thank you for a delightfully contenting story! :D The ending was absolutely perfect. I just realized how amazing it was that the story wasn't centered wholly on Hermione and Bill, but it was like a rewrite of the Deathly Hallows. This was pure genius. Thank you for posting this up on ff.n, it gave me a huge sense of joy. The fic was beautifully written, and I couldn't have asked to read anything better.
| ASTRONOMlC chapter 40 . 2/15/2012
This chapter was phenomenal! I don't have a single complaint :D Except I kind of wish that you added a part with where we got to see Snape speak in rhyme, haha, that would have been funny. But what's done is done, and I can be left to daydream my perfect version of the scene. Great job, again! -Grey
| ASTRONOMlC chapter 36 . 2/15/2012
Wow. The relationship between Sirius and Hermione is so confusing my head's exploding with knowledge. But it actually makes sense, and the way you set it up is actually really beautiful. You have a way with words :]
| ASTRONOMlC chapter 15 . 2/13/2012
This is soooo amazing! :D The only thing is that I feel like Hermione might be a little too close and "friendly" with everyone for my liking. I think there may be a couple too many tickle fights. (If Snape and Hermione have a tickle fight I may as well just go and die, because that's truly unfathomable. And creepy.) Beyond that, I LOVE IT! Oh, and it seems weird that Hermione can call Professor Snape by his first name. It seems to me that their friendship is developing a little too quickly and Sev is showing his soft side too easily; letting his guard down around Hermione far too quickly. Please don't take this the wrong way, I guess I'm just putting my thoughts on the page. Hope I'm not reviewing TOO much for this story (especially since it's finished...) But anyway... I think I'll get back to reading this pure awesomeness (; Love, Grey
| ASTRONOMlC chapter 9 . 2/13/2012
This is AMAZING :D I love it! And 59 chapters, wow. It's already captivating. I really really love how you aren't rushing things with Bill and Hermione AT ALL, and the plot you'v set up is magnificent! Some BillxHermione fanfic is pointless, plotless fluff. This is great! I can't wait to see what else is in store for the budding (practically nonexistent at chapter 9, but I'm not complaining) couple in the next 50 chapters! The one thing I'll complain about is the line near the end of the chapter I'm reviewing, "...because he [Sirius] was one of the many wrapped round her little finger." To quote Ron, she sounds a bit like a, "scarlet woman." (Didn't I say I was quoting Ron? :) Another thing is that I feel like Kingsley shouldn't have the nickname Kings, only because he seems like such a powerful, calm-aura, and impassive figure. Oh, and maybe I didn't read properly, but I'm a bit confused as to why there aren't any other Hogwartians around? :) Is it summertime? (Hmm, that sounds quite feasible, now that I think about it) Sooo...yeah, it's a great story! I really love it :) Cheers! -Grey