Reviews for Heir To The Four Founders
Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2017
59 chapters and it's not even a romance? Meh. Thanks for the warning, though. A lot of writers would lure readers in with the prospect of an epic romance which would be misleading them if naught happened, so I do appreciate the notice.
acompletenerd chapter 59 . 3/23/2017
I enjoyed your story. How they defeated Voldemort was brilliant. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Guest chapter 21 . 1/3/2016
I like the story and the writing is pretty good, but it seems a bit too formal. Use more contractions and speak out loud when writing dialogue to see if it feels natural.
Mrs.MeighanOliverWood chapter 4 . 11/10/2015
There are really great ideas behind this story, however the grammar really needs some help. The run on sentences can be a bit distracting, and things like capitalizing the first letter in the sentence are as well.
dixie326 chapter 13 . 6/24/2015
I was wondering if you were going to explain that comment she made in the flashback about how Sirius was also important to her.
dixie326 chapter 9 . 6/24/2015
Hermione being badass and kicking death eater butt is one of the best things in Harry Potter fan fiction!
J.D. RavenMoore chapter 34 . 7/28/2014
So I'm guessing she asked about his favorite sex position? Makes sense ...
killer4853 chapter 3 . 7/17/2014
Keylena17 chapter 41 . 3/14/2014
This chapter was great! I laughed so hard at the flying monkeys.
Keylena17 chapter 36 . 3/14/2014
Where are the battles, and the fierce warrior Hermione? She is supposed to be powerful and doing all these great things but so far it's been love and fluff with tiny pieces of action mixed in. Just wondering...
katrineeee chapter 7 . 1/19/2014
Great plot. Horrible writing. chapter 20 . 12/14/2013
So I'm reading, and laughing at the prank of December 14th. Then I chuckle a bit, because it's currently December while I read this. Then I look at the calendar and realize it is Saturday December 14th, and if that isn't fate, I don't know what it. Also your story is lovely, and I enjoy the Blaise-luna side-relationship... If I were Harry and Ginny I would have hidden from everyone, and run from mrs Weasley like a bat out of hell xD
Ankta8876 chapter 2 . 7/29/2013
I think the story is great so far and the interlude thing was really helpful but what happend with malfoy and zabini how come they're there ? That really confused me but so far the story seems interesting
Guest chapter 23 . 7/12/2013
loved this chapter
PansyParkinslut chapter 43 . 2/12/2013
Hmm, does that mean she can switch from one form to another? That would be a rather interesting twist
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