Reviews for past future present
keithallen chapter 1 . 2/7
'Thump' Thump'
Electroshock! ZAP

Ugh... still no pulse. It's a shame this story died.
Daisy-023 chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
KEEPITUP!
M-Angel 05 chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
Like it so far. Please say your gonna update soon? It would be a nice Thanksgiving present...lol!
A-01 chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
i quiet enjoyed this, good grammar, good spelling, punctuation is up to speed, and the plot seems very fun and interesting, hoping for more
DaemonWelsh chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
I would love to see more of this. Its a good storyline, albeit it looks a bit under-read. Good spelling, grammar, easy to read. Please continue with your work on this story.
jameron4eva chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
SORRY TO ALL, I MENT POST HALO 3, just realized after posting.