|Reviews for This Mortal Life|
| The-Perks-of-Being-a-Lesbian chapter 7 . 1/23
Fucking homophobic twatholes! They can't do that! Fuck...
| The-Perks-of-Being-a-Lesbian chapter 4 . 1/23
GAHH FINALLY A STORY THAT IS ACCURATE ABOUT GAYNESS. I mean yeah, I love a utopia-esque tolerance story as much as the nest teenage lezzy, But damn...
| The-Perks-of-Being-a-Lesbian chapter 1 . 1/23
HOLY. POOP. TBH I do not usually like ocs but dayum... Dat Adam swag tho.
| brynn.brigham chapter 35 . 12/26/2013
Ooh you should do a follow up,story to this future take!
| brynn.brigham chapter 31 . 12/26/2013
Poor Adam. Even more so poor Jake! So glad to see the Cullen's rally around him. It's great that all three guys offered to kill those bastards!
| brynn.brigham chapter 28 . 12/26/2013
This was a beautiful chapter. It was great to see Jake and Adam with the Cullen's. Good to see Jake and Edward have their talk.
| thatbitchcalledkharma chapter 36 . 10/1/2013
OMG! I TRULY love slash fics, just because 2 smoking hot men together YUMMINESS to the fullest! But I am truly a romantic and I have to say, even with all of the internal and external struggle Jake and Adam went through; HANDS DOWN the BEST non-canon, hell or cannon story I have EVER read! I want an Adam of my very own...lol...Jake can come too! ;) I don't think the story was too long at all and I am soooooo glad that you decided to show how their lives continued and how they grew and exactly what their HEA happened to be. You are an excellent writer and I commend you for your "out of the box" pairing, it was refreshing and utterly lovely! Thank you for sharing it with me!
| Sea Native chapter 36 . 8/20/2013
oh gosh, absolutely adored the entire story!
| meohmya420 chapter 34 . 8/17/2013
Oh good lord I loved your story, It was amazing and unique and I was just so hooked from the beginning . I really love this ending, its beautiful and fitting and I am about to cry over my coffee from it. I just love your writing and the original pairings you use, which are so much better then all the mainstream stories I am finding lately. Keep up the awesome writing.
| Uma chapter 31 . 5/27/2013
Hello! I started reading this story yesterday, and have since constantly read it on my phone x) i ususally don't review anything, but since your AN at the end of chapter 31... I love this story! It's moving, and i like how you manage to bring in the vampires all through the story, though i really like the parts with only Jake and his family, loads!
The only thing i don't like as much (but doesn't really bother me too mich), and wanted to point out, is how you presented imprinting. I don't know if it's wrong or rriggt, but my understanding of it is that the shifters just become what the imprintees need them to be. So it wouldn't bother Quil that Claire is a toddler, because he has lost that sort of feelings with the imprinting. He'd probably go from being a brother/parental figure, to best friend, to lover - but only when Claire needs him to be that. I don't know if that was helpful at all...
Anyway... I love love love your story! Don't give it up! :D
| jace4ever chapter 36 . 5/25/2013
I absolutley loved this story. You are one wonderful writer. Thank you
| MadWorldZ chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
...YOU ARE MY ALL TIME FAVORITE AUTHOR IN FANFIC I EVER ENCOUNTERED THANK YOU! PLEASE make more stories like Jacob x Oc please!
| Love chapter 36 . 5/3/2013
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH.
I think i am gonna read it over again *Giggles*
btw im a gay man and this was AMAZING!
| telling chapter 31 . 5/3/2013
I LOVE THIS STORY!
I'm gonna tell all my friends about it. I kinda wish Jacob would get to kill the motherfuckers who hurt Adam or at least have the cullens do it in graphic detail because gay bashing should get you the death sentence *PUNCHES his pillow and screams into it*
| more chapter 25 . 5/3/2013
needs at least 1 sex scene per chapter if you ask me, to keep it hot. Love your characters btw 3