Reviews for Charm School
wildphoenix6 chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
Glue Stick Gary chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Reading this fic had me giggling and cracking up. It was soo funny! I loved every minute of reading it. I've recently came across your stories and I just love them all. I'm a fan of your writing style and your humor. Good job :)
Kaleia chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Um...Im so sorry im a bit confused there I tried to understand but no such alittle...Poor Jazz and Blaster that now they know they been had (Oh Snap!) and wait a minute here! *Sniff Sniff* I smell...Revenge! Yeah The 2 Swaggers will get there revenge! Great job! XD (Cant believe its all a joke! Oh Shiznets!) Cant wait to see what happens next.
OrianPrime92 chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
One: used outside of a storage facility for Wheeljack’s experiments, whether they were a spectacular success or a spectacular failure.

His experiments ARE always spectacular... XD

Two: “Seriously, Jazz,” Ratchet growled, “I’m gonna strangle them.”

How has he managed to last to that point? I woulda tried by then. (Funny. They die strangled by a human! XD)

Three: “So,” Jazz said, “you were saying why you were here.” “No, I wasn’t.”

Nice try Gears.

Four: Instead, Gears whispered. “I broke Superfunland.”


Five: “Do you think this is some kind of joke?” he asked rhetorically.

Sideswipe, who Jazz knew never met a rhetorical question he didn’t like, smiled broadly. “Why, yes sir, in fact it is.”

Sideswipe turned his smile toward Carly, who had started gathering her books and papers into her bag. She smiled in return and said, “Thanks guys, you did great.”

Then she started making her way toward the door. Jazz and Blaster’s optics followed her as she walked away. She turned back once, and grinned mischievously at the two of them.

“Gotcha,” she said, and then she left.

... -facepalm-

Six: “Prowl was in on this?”

Blaster should know Prowl doesn't have a sense of humor. Though if he had been in on it... EPIC.

Seven: "...I mean, that broken Superfunland stunt was real enough and if anybody needs help with a little human-centric tact, it’s Gears.

... Gears really broke the place...? -staring in shock, fighting a grin and laugh, and still managing to look scared-

I worship Carly.

And Gears for really breaking it!

Eerie Iri chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
I'm beginning to contemplate asking you to marry me. Hilarious and well written, great job._
Starfire201 chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
Gotta say I love this little series you have here. I will definitely be looking for more.