Reviews for The Third Of October
xIcyChanx chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
Ah, I'm crying. Such a meaningful fic :') Alphonse is such a sweety, I can easily picture him saying these lines :)
Teagsiebabe85 chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Oh wow, this was... really well done

Well done, this was excellent!
DuHSPaZZiNGFeL chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Your take on Edward's view in life was incredible. End of the road versus crossroads was a great way to explain it, and for that, I commend you.

Definite favorite. :)
GrilledPeanutButter chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
... I never really thought of how Al thought about that day. Awesome job.
redmustarddd chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
This is beautiful! It nearly made me cry, you're a great writer!
Xxmgxx3445xX chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
This is one of the few fanfics in Al's POV that I liked. Al is completely in character and his emotions and thoughts really fit what he was going through at the time.

You definitely deserve more than just one review for this! Keep up the amazing writing! ]]
Griselda Banks chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
I liked this! This definitely deserves at least one review _ Not only are you actually coherent when you write - which I'm becoming increasingly thankful for - but you capture the brothers' feelings right. I don't think you fail at angst at all; this was a very good level of angst, and very tastefully done. I also liked your thoughts on why the day they burned their house is so important, rather than the day they brought their mother back. It makes sense.

Great fic! Keep writing; we need fics like this! _