Reviews for Home and Heart
Guest chapter 5 . 1/13/2013
She's 18, a legal adult, she can't be adopted.
ILoveRobPattinson chapter 5 . 6/15/2012
I absolutely love this story! I think it's amazing the whole family welcomed Bella! - It's beautiful! Please update soon! Can't wait for more!
wiccanvampire17 chapter 4 . 12/16/2011
This is my third time reading this and it still gets to me :')
ffictionreader01 chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
That was really sad.
wiccanvampire17 chapter 5 . 7/10/2011
This was so cute it brought tears to my eyes :') good job ! :)
Crystal Joyy chapter 5 . 6/3/2011
Loved it! :)
Crystal Joyy chapter 3 . 6/3/2011
I talk to myself all the time. I'm not crazy!... *Sigh*...yes I am... :/
ignore common sense chapter 5 . 2/24/2011
uh... I LOVE YOUR STORY

so pretty please update soon?
nightline chapter 5 . 11/14/2010
This story was fun to read, and I really liked it. Yet the ending seemed a bit abrupt - they met her twenty minutes ago, and boom, adoption. But that's just me, and apart from that, I enjoyed it a lot :-)
princess1996 chapter 5 . 5/25/2010
i LOVE IT!
bookwormlove chapter 5 . 2/6/2010
cute story:)
mehek18 chapter 5 . 1/24/2010
okay i loved ur summary. i like how you started the story. i think you need to stretch this story more to make it better. you need to slowly drag it to dramatics. this story could reach 10 reviews if you begin from chapter 2, thats where your story went to fast. how can a homeless girl admit her truth right when she met this guy. and you skipped over the parts where she met the rest of the family and how she connected with them. i think you were to quick with this story. unless that is what you r planning. anyway i like the idea of this story. very cool
Jessie's Girl 21 chapter 5 . 12/15/2009
thi is so amazingly good!
Cola Marie Whitlock chapter 5 . 12/15/2009
thts awesome
TheMuggleInDumbledoresArmy chapter 5 . 12/14/2009
Great story, can't wait for next chapter!
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