|Reviews for Traffic|
| ArodLoverus2001 chapter 6 . 1/11/2011
LOL great story!
| J.DRAST chapter 5 . 1/20/2010
Hello. Good-as I wished. Charlie snoring. Must be nice to sleep on the job. And ofcourse, Edward would worry primarily about Bella, instead of himself. Thanks. Suzan Noerr
| J.DRAST chapter 4 . 1/20/2010
Hello. Funny-short & sweet. I realize that you have already posted other chapters now, but if I had to choose, without looking, I'd say leave'im in there overnight-to learn his lesson. (I'm a parent. What can I say?) Thanks. Suzan Noerr
| Lady G 101 chapter 5 . 1/20/2010
can't wait to see what comes next lol
| LethalFuror113 chapter 5 . 1/19/2010
Oh no! Edward doesn't have his ANGLE.
That is the only error that really mattered. It should be ANGEL. You simply switched the letters!
| bitten lamb.x chapter 4 . 12/8/2009
In the morning :) then we can see what Charlie decides to do to Edward :L x
| SaveMeRob chapter 4 . 12/7/2009
its great esme should bail him come on hes a vamp surely he can get out by his self
| Lady G 101 chapter 3 . 11/16/2009
That is so funny...i'm too mad Alice didn't tell her though cause it would have been funny! GREAT CHAPTER...START WORKING ON OLD TASTE I NEED SOMETHING TO DO!
| J.DRAST chapter 3 . 11/13/2009
Hello. I really liked this chapter. Charlie doesn't care much for Edward, but he frequently lets Bella "stay over at Alice's house-the Cullen house." If he didn't like Edward, why would he let her stay at his home? He should know that she woulds see Edward there, spend time with him there. And if he didn't like him, then why would he want Bella to spend time with him? Oh well, I think it sure caught Bella by suprise when Edward tells her over the phone that he is in jail. But how valiant he was, to inquire if she was okay-he was putting her well-being and emotions first, over his own.
And Alice thinks this is all funny. I think Emmett will never let Edward live this down, he will tease him forever about it.
I still have no clue who the two visitors are. I am stumped! But the curiosity is getting the best of me. Perhaps Mr. Jenks-the Cullens' lawyer-he may be called in to represent Edward in his legal defense and questioning upon being arrested and interrogated at the jail. And maybe a news reporter from the local newspaper, to do a front page story/photos on the efficiency of the new state-of-the-art traffic surveilance, and the first victim of it's superior technology as a part of the local police force. Please update soon, so I can get over the stress from this cliff hanger! Thanks. Suzan Noerr
| Lady G 101 chapter 2 . 11/10/2009
LOL i can tell this story is going to be hilarious I can't wait to see the conversation the have at the station, and how his family, and bella react to this
| FandangoDancer chapter 2 . 11/7/2009
lol, really good, keep going
| J.DRAST chapter 2 . 11/3/2009
Hello. I liked this chapter. Little does Edward know what is about to happen, huh? Once Charlie told him to follow him to the station, he knew it was radars. What will Bella think? Will she be mad at Charlie, Edward or both? Can't wait to read more. Thanks. Suzan Noerr
| J.DRAST chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
Hello. This sounds like a very funny chapter. So, Charlie and the police department are upgrading to "state of the art" equipment, changing with the times! Yeah, that's funny when he didn't even need to look it up on the computer-he already knew who it was. I wonder if he has a personalized license plate and if so, what it says? Maybe it says LIV4EVR? Thanks.
Can't wait to read next chapter! Suzan Noerr
| Avis Alice chapter 2 . 11/3/2009
This story is hilarious and really in character!
| adele350 chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
its very very short