Reviews for Being Shot
Lisa Smithers chapter 1 . 1/18
I really enjoyed reading this. I think it's a more accurate take on what would have actually happened than what was shown in the show. I really wish the show would have shown Shawn on the way to the hospital and at the hospital.
PapayaK chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
I enjoyed. :-D
Hawkwing-Mistkit chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Um.. sorry- great story and all, but you got something wrong. It was a through and through wound. You could see the bullet hole in the back of his jacket. Just pointing it out.
BiRDiEs95 chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
That was great! I'm pretty sure you got everything in chronological order too! Wonderful!
Livia2001 chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Great story. Awesome writing.
zammierox chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
wow deep 'n' dark...but still good!
neon-crocodile chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
absolutely loved it...i love how you wrote it, and you didn't even see the episode yet! YOU GOT SOME SKILL! D
EmeraldFire512 chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
very well written, and impressive for not seeing the episode.
barkeep chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
Lovely. So much said in such a short story. This was very true to character and really gave a sense of Shawn's inner self without resorting to girly melodrama. Well done!
adventurejunkie9 chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
this is a very impressive piece if writing. i love all of your discriptive words and phrases. they all smooth together very nicely. great, great work ) write more!
samgirl19 chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
this is very good story.
Daryl Ann chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
Very nice! "...a slightly changed version of his reality." I liked that. Thanks for writing! :o) DA
twomoms chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
Very nice! You captured the emotions perfectly. Thanks!