Reviews for Beauty and the geek
nay-nay1990 chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Love lemons. Loved the one shot
twilightmom1 chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
That was soo cute. I loved it!
twilight-is-lovee chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Aww, haha, nerdy Eddie!
RosaBella75 chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
You asked, so here I am. :)

Great job of making them really feel like 17 yr olds. Zesty lemon.

My advice would be to find a Beta. Human nature makes it harder to find our own small errors, plus a second set of eyes help us find where to deepen the story in ways we often don't think of for ourselves.

Good job.
babylopez2008 chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
"Nothing too intermit" did you mean "intimate"?

Why would Edward be afraid to lose control with Bella? Is he a vamp?

“Because I don’t want to go to far” he sighed. that’s it! I can’t take it any longer with him. The "to" you should use is "too".

hmm... it could use a bit more back story in there...lol yeah when I do that I can't shut up but it helps make the story longer and fill in the missing details.

So why was Edward thinking those thoughts in the first place?
xanimejunkie chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
Aw... this was a cute lemon one-shot! . I love seeing nerdy Edward. 3
PoisonAngelMuse chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
you asked me and here I am

really hot thsi lemon

love a geek edward

xx
icefang7 chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
this is really great! i like it! thanks
Bammers chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
that was good i will read more...
twilight-fedishfreak chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
yay! i think this one would be the best one to continue for a whole story. lol , everyone loves geeky edward. Basically everyhting I told you in the message for Sexual tension, the same applies the actual climax though, you got better on that one. i like it, just try to drag it out more. I think this one might wind up my favorite one!

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jennayg123 chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
Loved it! Can't wait to read your other stories!
patch138 chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
The idea is good, but could use a little more work...grammer is a big thing, proper tenses and that sort of thing...

~Tiffany
Saren Kol chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
Hot hot hot!
latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
Enjoyed it.
alieangel chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
:)
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