|Reviews for Rest In Pieces|
| iLupinus chapter 8 . 7/6/2012
As much as I love this story, and the relationship between Kakashi and Sasuke, I can't stand this. You don't have to reply because I am leaving this story behind.
Critics United and Literate Union aren't to blame for everything. They both have pages where you see exactly what they had reported. If a story isn't there, then it's not their doing. They're not bullies. They actually want to listen to the admins and do what they tell us to. Did you know that they warn people they could lose stories? Only after they acknowledge the rules and still break them is when they're reported by those groups in particular. They're not bad people.
Breaking rules is a bad thing. If that means song fics, lists, challenges, and author notes as chapters aren't allowed, well then so be it. Accounts being banned? Well they either had one too many violations, threatened bodily harm to people, trolling people, are underaged, or are ban-evading. Stories being removed? Was their title not PG? Was there a sex scene? Did they have an author's note posted as a chapter? People driven to tears? Over a fanfiction site? Well, I'm not going to comment on that.
Again, you don't have to listen to me, but I figured I would say something.
| 00-night-eyes-00 chapter 8 . 6/11/2012
hey, that sucks that you are getting bullied off the site. if a story is rated and has warnngs that is all the authors should have to do. its up to the individual to choose whether they want to read it, its a free country after all... or at least it is where i am reading it from. Thanks for enforming us about an alternative site, but is there a way for us to get notices of updates as well. i am happy to give you an email address if that helps.
so annoyed that your stories are getting targeted, especially when there are heaps that are still on here that are worse... probably shouldn't mention that otherwise someone else might start a witch hunt on them. its annoying cozx the best feature of this site is the update notifications.
good luck at the with your writting, hope those clubs go away... is there a way that we can get them kicked of the site for ruining the atmosphere, if they really are bullying people then they should be reported for it. Flames are fine but people should not get vindictive responses, if they dont like the story they should stop reading it.
sorry about my little rant, i feel very strongly about people spoiling everyone elses fun coz they wont abide by the warnings.
| ceridwen chapter 7 . 1/14/2012
loving the story, but a bit confused. how can it go from kakashi and sasuke in the cave to kakashi being dead?
| oakleaf chapter 7 . 10/29/2011
Wow. Don't know haw any idea I come up with will top that one...
Amazing work. I love your style and admire your ideas.
Because I really want to see more, I'll just list a few ideas that may or may not help:
-Returning home after chapter 6. Reactions, what happens to Hebi
-Sasuke accepting the news that Itachi isn't evil
-Meeting Itachi, what he has to say about Kakashi
-Sasuke's reaction to an injured Kakashi
Hope this will fire up your story mind so we can see more!
| kuro.no.nukenin chapter 7 . 10/9/2011
| MalikaiDragonSlayer chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
Awwww that was adorable this story better be fluffy! At least a little.
| girlwithattitude chapter 7 . 3/29/2011
AW! HOW SAD! POOR SASUKE! POOR KAKASHI!
| 00-night-eyes-00 chapter 7 . 3/28/2011
...that chapter did not make sense. i have not read this story in a while so i re-read the whole thing and in chapter 6 sasuke is reunited with kakashi and in chapter 7 it is saying that he never saw them after he left for orochimaru's its also saying that he defected not was sent on a mission? i am confused. :(
| Kai Hatake chapter 5 . 3/27/2011
oh this chapter almost made me cry it so sad how he's leaving and to protect them. And the way that you worded it didn't make it any less sad. It so sad but addicting I just have to keep reading.
| Ainsel3 chapter 6 . 2/18/2011
scusa se scrivo in italiano, ma quando voglio lasciare un commento serio non riesco a farlo nel mio inglese stentato ù_ù
ovviamente l'inglese so leggerlo, altrimenti non avrei trovato la tua fiction, ma scriverlo è un'altra storia... spero riuscirai a tradurre questo commento, magari con google translate XD
Come premessa posso solo dire che è quasi impressionante che tu la pensi come me sul manga, sui personaggi, in modo assolutamente identico.
Io amo svisceralmente Sasuke, e come te non dubito che sia un ragazzo buono travolto dagli eventi sempre più grandi di lui e manipolato dai cattivi di mezzo manga _
poi penso che Kakashi sia davvero come suo padre, concordo (ma qui nessuno può dire il contrario XD) che Sakura lo ama da morire e che Naruto lo considera il suo amico fraterno.
Riguardo questo volevo dirti di non prendertela troppo per il manga attuale ù_ù è vero che gli ultimi spoiler su Sasuke sono disastrosi, ma solo in superficie... perché in realtà viene fatto capire benissimo che lui ora è solo spersonalizzato dall'odio e dalla disperazione (come non capirlo) e quindi prima o poi tornerà in sé.
Poi che Sakura ama lui, che Naruto morirebbe per salvare lui e che Kakashi si preoccupa per lui sono verità incontestabili ù_ù
| 00-night-eyes-00 chapter 6 . 10/24/2010
love it can not wait for more
| LoVe-WiLl-fInD-a-WaY chapter 6 . 3/31/2010
I love it! 3 plz update soon!
| Obelisk of Light chapter 6 . 2/20/2010
Hmm, I didn't expect Bee to show up in the story. But he's my second favourite character and is woefully ignored by the fandom, so I'm not complaining. Although, I'm quite puzzled at his sudden appearance ...
Coming back to the chapter, I'm glad you didn't make Sasuke win. I know you're not going to kill Sasuke off for now, so I'm not worried.
As always, I love the father/son moments. Keep 'em coming!
| ArAnCaR No. 6 chapter 6 . 2/19/2010
I adored it... oh my goodness, it was even better than the manga, although you have to admit, the next bit will definitely be interesting, ne?
| XxBunniLuvXx chapter 6 . 2/19/2010
LOL! I find Killer Bee's rapping funny, but it is very annoying.
Anyways, this chap was awesome!
Update when you can!