Chapter 7

Edward says that "he has always considered himself to be a rational man." Oh, when? When you were a silver spooned human child?

He goes on to say that vampires aren't rational. But...you just said...Now I'm confused. Hes been a vampire for over 100 years...hes ALWAYS thought of himself as rational...but vampires aren't rational.

So, why even open you fucking mouth? Contradictions are annoying. I'm ALWAYS happy, but I'm so sad. ?

Chapter 4

Why even go to her, just to tell her you cant be with her? That seems really fucking stupid considering the fact that she didn't know who the fuck you were until you introduced yourself. SOOOO DUMB.

If his "beast" is so violent he probably needs to just stay with tanwhore. I'm sure they had rough sex all the time, sounds like that's what he wants.

And I really hate that hes so nasty that he would fuck a old whore like Tanya, shes been fucking her was through 1000 years with different men...so fucking gross.

And why refer to that part of him as if its a separate entity?" The beast inside me" It sounds so damn dumb. Like theres a part of him that's separated from the rest and THAT part sometimes wants stuff lol. HES a vampire, all of him is a vampire. HE CRAVES these things not "the beast inside him."

This would be a lot better if bella wasn't such a skank, and DIDNT talk in her fucking sleep.

AWWW you ruined it on the second chapter...he fucked Tanya? Seriously? why would he fuck the oldest nastiest whore on the face of the planet? I just cant see a mind reader doing that...shes so fucking used up, AND shes really ugly. Have you seen that face? WTF?

WOW so good!

What a skanky whore. He must like dick because he has no problem going down on her when she's full of cum and kissing her after her mouth has been full of dick. Classy.

This story definitely did not end up where I expected when I first started reading it but that just shows how amazing it was. I was really surprised at every revelation, I loved it so much! Plus this Edward is def one of my faves! Amazing job :)

Wow, just wow! I can't tell you how much I loved this wonderful story. I laughed, I cried, you made me so anxious sometimes that I "disintegrated" all my finger nails... so happy they finally have their HEA. I loved the originality of your story line as well as your writing skills. You are a very talented writer, I hope you'll come back and write more fanfics in the future.

I'm now eager to read the epilogues... must do it, right now...

Thank you so much for sharing your amazing talent. All the best.

Beautiful written ! Love all the details

Thanks for writing an imaginative take on the Edward/Bella story. It was a very enjoyable read. It took me nearly two years to write an epi on one of my stories - so no biggie! Good luck with your future writing.

I couldn't resist it, I love your story so much I spent my time locking myself away in my room everyday

Well, this has been on my TBR list for-eh-ver and I'm so glad I finally took the time to read it. I was a great story and I really appreciated the "complication" Bella with the change. It was quite a creative twist to the plot.

Thanks so much for sharing your story and I hope I get the chance to ready more of you work someday.

"I simultaneously patted myself on the back for creating the perfect man, and cursed myself for producing a fantasy that could never be realized."
I know the feeling, Bella!
Meadow sex, yay!

Poor Edward! Interesting twist on the wolf's blood.
". I want to be with you, Edward, and if that means I have to learn how to avoid your homicidal episodes, then that's what I'll do."
Best line! Rs
Xoxo

Finally they talk (and other things)! The dogs had to appear! Running to read more
Xoxo.