Reviews for A Fatherly Figure REPOST
Merr chapter 4 . 9/27/2014
Continue?
Jacobdraco chapter 4 . 2/18/2013
I love it please update
alex chapter 4 . 3/12/2012
im ready for the next chapter
megs chapter 4 . 2/8/2012
I really like this story! can you pleassseee keep writing?
Melody Syper Carston chapter 4 . 5/22/2011
Very good story. I like the plotline and whatnot. I especially love the nicer side of both Lucius (while he was still alive) and Severus.

Watch your spelling, though. There are simple mistakes throughout each chapter (not many, really), but they form different words that don't make sense in the places they're used.

Also when addressing a person in dialog, there should be commas separating the person's name from the rest of the quote.

Other than that there's nothing I see wrong with it. Very well written besides those mistakes!

Melody Syper Carston
ashlee chapter 4 . 5/21/2011
Very Good. What Now?
Ashlee chapter 2 . 5/21/2011
Again Poor Kid
Ashlee chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Poor kid set the house on fire. Liking it so far.
michelle1203 chapter 4 . 12/14/2010
this is really well written. please update :)
fied chapter 4 . 7/6/2010
Poor Draco nearly broke my heart reading this

plz update
Emily-Jade.x chapter 4 . 6/5/2010
Enjoying this so far. Hope you update soon :)
Daisy Mai chapter 4 . 5/5/2010
This is a new story line for me. Looking forward to more. Thanks
Jasperslover4 chapter 4 . 4/27/2010
It was a good chapter, kinda short but good.
mhaireni chapter 4 . 4/10/2010
Really enjoying the story so far. Im looking forward to the next installment :)
Cheshire chapter 4 . 4/1/2010
I am enjoying this story so is nice to see Severus and Draco having a friendly, familiar relationship. I am guessing that there might have been some underhanded doings on the night of the fire, since the Malfoys would surely have warded their home against ordinary fire? Well, I guess I will have to wait and see.
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