Reviews for A Fatherly Figure REPOST
Guest chapter 4 . 8/22/2016
hurry up!
Guest chapter 4 . 8/15/2016
please huury with the next chapter.
wandamarie chapter 4 . 11/6/2015
please update the story
wandamarie chapter 3 . 11/6/2015
thank you
wandamarie chapter 2 . 11/6/2015
oh my
wandamarie chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
oh my great start thanks
Merr chapter 4 . 9/27/2014
Continue?
Jacobdraco chapter 4 . 2/18/2013
I love it please update
alex chapter 4 . 3/12/2012
im ready for the next chapter
megs chapter 4 . 2/8/2012
I really like this story! can you pleassseee keep writing?
Melody Syper Carston chapter 4 . 5/22/2011
Very good story. I like the plotline and whatnot. I especially love the nicer side of both Lucius (while he was still alive) and Severus.

Watch your spelling, though. There are simple mistakes throughout each chapter (not many, really), but they form different words that don't make sense in the places they're used.

Also when addressing a person in dialog, there should be commas separating the person's name from the rest of the quote.

Other than that there's nothing I see wrong with it. Very well written besides those mistakes!

~Melody Syper Carston
ashlee chapter 4 . 5/21/2011
Very Good. What Now?
Ashlee chapter 2 . 5/21/2011
Again Poor Kid
Ashlee chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Poor kid set the house on fire. Liking it so far.
michelle1203 chapter 4 . 12/14/2010
this is really well written. please update :)
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