Reviews for Unconditional
Guest chapter 11 . 6/27
This is disgusting. You should be ashamed of yourself.
Amy100 chapter 51 . 4/17
Although I do think this story is good and it's written well, Alina is a very unrealistic character. Not only is she Mary sueish, but she is much too normal for someone who has been getting raped and abused from six years old. Abuse like that really fucks up your behavior and mental health, and somehow I don't think she would be able to have sex with Sirius or even be with him after the abuse she's experienced.
trinity16 chapter 34 . 6/1/2017
Purplestan chapter 31 . 1/21/2017
You're grammar is terrible in this chapter . This chapter is a whole paragraph bcos you haven't left line spaces. As well as this you are meant to leave a line when someone else speaks but you haven't so its confusing
Purplestan chapter 9 . 1/21/2017
I'm thinking that her dad has been abusing her. I really hope it isn't though.
Purplestan chapter 7 . 1/21/2017
This chapter had me crying
Purplestan chapter 1 . 1/20/2017
You are using apostrophes as speech marks :/
HauntedCinders chapter 2 . 3/22/2016
Your grammar needs some work, but other than that, this looks pretty good so far.
Reader chapter 52 . 10/26/2015
Amazing writing! Please keep writing, even if not HP fanfics, I would love to read it!
Dumbledore's got style chapter 23 . 9/16/2015
nerdsdoitbetter chapter 20 . 8/28/2015

Oh, I have a horrible feeling about poor Polly. And it's only just clicked that Alice, is Nevile's Ma. I nearly cried.
nerdsdoitbetter chapter 16 . 8/28/2015
nerdsdoitbetter chapter 15 . 8/28/2015
Oooh. Ok. Didnt expect that. I thought she'd be furious and sad that she hadnt stopped her father sooner after all these years.
nerdsdoitbetter chapter 14 . 8/28/2015
Cute! Their playfulness feels natural and real. :)
nerdsdoitbetter chapter 13 . 8/28/2015
Wow, finally out there. I adore Sirius.
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