|Reviews for once upon a shattered life|
| ashley chapter 2 . 11/8/2009
Hey this seems like a pretty cool story, i can't wait to see were you take it from here. and I know you said the vampire parts are way later in the story but may you could move them up a bit :)
Also some parts of the story seem a bit strained just an FYI. like it so for so keep on writing.