I love the fact that they actually got married

Edward is so sweet. If only real life held as much sweetness

There wouldn't be so many divorces

I have not seen remember me Yet But I'm dying to.

Cant wait to read more

I am loving the tenderness of this story! i think they will somehow make it work for them and follow their own rules...but please no babies...i don't remember bella being on birth control.

I ttly agree about the lemon thing. My sister reads my stories, so it's really awkward for me. This story has gotten A LOT better than the beginning, things are starting to look good for Bella. I can't wait to see where this goes.

How can he not love her! I still can't get over that. I wanted an Edward chapter so badly, all this mystery is killing me! I even want to kill Bella for ruining her new dress too. Really good chapter! ;)

*long sigh* that was beautiful and i didn't need a squishy lemon, for a moment I forgot why they got married, but then remembered and it was all just perfect.

Remember Me...wow...I didn't know what it was about and boy what different kind of movie, I'm going to see it again as I think I missed a bit as I starring at Rob so much...hehe

Looking forward to your next update

This chapter was worth the wait, and I think you made the right decision to keep the focus on Bella. The wedding night was perfect for this story, and I had to laugh at the Grandma comment in your note. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Oh, that was wonderful! I have been eagerly anticipating reading this chapter-I was so excited to see that you had updated! I absolutely loved it. You have a real talent for writing a beautiful, moving story. I can't wait to read more! Thank you!

this was so nicely done. i was kinda worried about the "wedding night" too (but more for the awkwardness of it), but you wrote it absolutely perfectly. explicit smut just wouldnt fit into this story, because the whole picture is much bigger than just sex.

i love how edward just makes everything so easy for bella, and how they just seem to fit each other so well. there doesnt seem to be any problems or awkwardness between them (at least now) and im very happy that they havent had any issues.

your bella is absolutely without a doubt one of my favorite bellas in the entire fandom. i love this entire story of her change and struggle to find herself and her trying to enjoy everything to the fullest. the whole story is so realistic, and its truly one of my favorites.

fantastic job! i cant wait for the next update )

Hi, just wanted to leave you a little review. This is a great story! I'm so happy I stumbled across it last night, and I haven't been able to stop until I finished the chapters you have posted!

I can't wait to read the next post! Update soon!

Hey!

So... someone Twitter-rec'd this about 20 hours ago, and I clicked on it and it sat open in a tab, and I carried on geeking out on a game I hadn't played in ten years, but then my eyes flicked over and read a paragraph... and then I couldn't look away.

A few hours later, I was laughing into my pillow at 6am, having just gone from teary to hysterical in the space of one line. You took me for a ride, and I loved it. XD

So, I'm always a sucker for a story you know is going to end in tragedy - I'm going to pretend I never read that A/N where you said Bella may or may not die, or at least implied it - because it makes the rest of the story that much more intense, knowing they can't have the grey and grandbabies HEA.

Alice's apartment was beyond vivid to me, and I could actually picture all of the characters perfectly - even those that were the antithesis of their canon counterparts. (Okay, maybe that was just Renee.) Obviously, the whole doomed ending thing was awesome, as was your dialogue, the pace, the realism, making up your own band so nobody thinks you're a douche even if you do have good taste... (You know, I don't think I've ever seen that before, in this form anyway.)

I'm also glad you didn't jump to EPOV, but only out of fussiness... I'd still have been reading, and it still would have been wonderful, but this story has an integrity that a lot of others don't. And no, having slept since reading, I can't quite remember why... but the impression's stil there.

Bella was so damn likeable - actually, most of the characters were. But Bella is always the hardest character to get right, to give her a personality that seems canon but doesn't put readers off, and to make her herself and not a self-insert. And still likeabe. And you pulled it off perfectly. Edward was pretty awesome too;; you tell us there's something wrong, ad we have no idea what it is.

Ah - narrative hooks. That was it. Your story is covered with them. There is absolutely no getting away once you've read a paragraph or two.

Basically... it only happens abotu once a month that I find a fic I enjoy, and it's even less often that I get through to the end and still want to read the updates. But I do here.

Thank you. Thank you so damn much.

And sorry for the epic, nonsensical review... that's a bad habit of mine.

Do you know who Twitter-rec'd you? I need to hug them. Or ask them to marry me so their recs are my recs and all that jazz.

Damn, I loved this.

This is a wonderful story, and this chapter was really beautiful. You captured all the emotions perfectly and Edward was just as perfect. I was worried that maybe he would be hesitant and a bit stand offish, but he was brilliant. I'm really enjoying this.

this was perfect! i actually really appreciate you not getting all lemony with it. thank you for that. i like how it calls back to breaking dawn and the swimming together on the first night.

Don't you dare let me go Edward Masen. Don't you dare. /

I love her mantra and I have a feeling a similar one goes through his head or will soon enough. Amazing chapter, their wedding night was really sweet and tasteful, well done :)

Rosybud-

This chapter was perfect! Totally worth the wait, although I am hoping the remainder will be quicker. Hopefully your writers block is resolved. Keep up the great work!

Entirely beautifully written chapter!

I loved it!

Update asap!

Au revoir!