Reviews for Nightmare Masquerade
squibblyquill chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
that was an original take on the ballroom
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Awwww that was GREAT. Chilling. Wonderful.
startraveller776 chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
And Sarah still wins in the end. This is dark and ghoulish, but wonderfully so. Nicely done! chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
That was beautiful :)!
Midnight's Queen chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Oh, my my my my my. How delicious! How... shall I say, /right/? To have both Sarah and Jareth trapped in the Masquerade, dancing tirelessly? Wonderful, simply wonderful!
Dark Roswellian Angel chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
Holy cow. Now THAT's a Halloween fic- seriously dark, haunting, and bewitching.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
that was...depressing.

NotxElven chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
Wow. Just wow. I love a little Cruel!Jareth, but I think Sarah's even better. It's great how she gets what she wants in the end. Darkfic is always great.

Small note...maybe try to polish the beginning. It works but it doesn't. If that makes any sense. What I mean is, generally the prose is very good, but a fine tooth comb is always helpful.

:) Great Story
notwritten chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
This has been good to read. Keep smiling. :-)
MyraValhallah chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
Wow, awesome.

Happy Halloween.
hazlgrnLizzy chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
A beautiful and haunting story!