Reviews for The Hunt
Scutie-Naos chapter 1 . 7/23/2016
*Spoiler alert. I'd hate to ruin someone's day.*
Look, I know you practically have a restraining order for this site. But for some reason the links on your bio aren't showing up - not for me at least. And I don't know where you are or how you've changed or even if you're still alive, but I just want you to know that you wrote pretty much all of my favorite Death Note stories. This stuff helped me get past my perpetual state of 'being-an-emotional-wreck-ness' after L's death. Thank you.
However, this vampire story in particular was one of my favorite-favorites, and I need closure. So I'm going to be following the story anyway, just in case by some miracle this one day shows up in my inbox.
Please update. Even if you are in fact dead, and your ghost is staring at a screen in the dead of night, thoroughly annoyed because your fingers keep going through the keyboard, find a way to write. I believe in you, and I believe in your supernatural prowess.
Midnight Rising chapter 5 . 1/8/2016
I just discovered this story and really like it! Please continue if you still are! It shows much promise!
Griffin-chan chapter 5 . 5/23/2014
Amazing story. I am a huge fan of Death Noteデスノート, which instantly makes me critical of fanfics. Your story I instantly fell in love with though. Your wording and sentence structure is excellent, your story progression and attention to details is fantastic, and keeping the characters to there original selves all the while making them yours is superb. I am quite excited to see where you take this story.( especially with what BB is and what is happening to L) Keep up the outstanding work and have a great life, peace.
Crazy reviewer chapter 5 . 3/19/2014
Update...PLEASE! (sob..sob) i wanna read pls update! :'(
Gasoline Diamond chapter 5 . 12/11/2013
O_O Okay, then
JFK chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
Love this please continue
lllll chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Hey I really like this fic so please tell me you did not give up
ViKsAtA chapter 5 . 1/25/2012
heheh... gonna finnish it in the next 3-4 year probably? That's a joke, but I'll be waiting for the next chappy! :D Love ya!
3waypetal chapter 5 . 1/10/2012
Awesome job, I absolutely love this story and hope that you finish it one day. It was this story that got me to really like Near, Matt, and Mello together.
amour tue lentement chapter 5 . 8/18/2011
I sure hope you get everything figured out, because you've got me hooked already~ :)
ghostie200011 chapter 2 . 7/22/2011
One thing I've noticed so far that has slightly bothered me (grammar nazi) is your usage of "troupe"

"Troupe" means 'a group of dancers, actors, or other entertainers who tour to different venues'

I think the word you're looking for is "troop" which means 'a group of soldiers, esp. a cavalry unit commanded by a captain, or an airborne unit.'

Also, when Near asks "L, when was the last time you slept?"

L replies "A while," which doesn't really make as much sense as "A while ago,".

But grammar-nazidom aside, I do love your stories and am enthralled by your newish story u Keep up the good work!
AkaiTsumi chapter 5 . 2/26/2011
Holy crap. You've done it AGAIN. Wow. Seriously, you're like, the Shakespeare of fanfiction or something ... revolutionizing writing as we know it...

But, hell, this story is amazing. It's absolutely incredible - your creativity and imagination, not to mention the fantastic writing skills they're matched with... I'm almost lost for words, every time I read something of yours. This story's particularly awesome because of the AU. XD It's like, this is how vampires are supposed to be written, not the sparkly ice blocks in Twilight. And how all the characters fit in is brilliant. Your OCs are great, (specially Odd!) and I nearly had a heart attack when Naomi and Raye turned up.

And much as I can't wait til the next chapter, take all the time you want to write it, coz then it'll be even more amazing and worth the wait than if you force yourself to produce something. Still, we'll all be waiting eagerly for that!
ohhai chapter 5 . 11/15/2010
Oh why do the best stories end up unfinished? This is probably one of the best fics I've ever had the pleasure of reading, and I've been reading fanfic for more years than I remember. All of your writing is brilliant actually, but this is truly epic. I know your life is busy but I'm hoping you'll be able to throw us a bone soon. I'm sure everyone else is waiting on the edges of their seats like I am.
Deprivation chapter 5 . 9/26/2010
*Is waiting for an update to this great idea

Patience has not depleted yet.
corriandar chapter 5 . 9/14/2010
Loving this ;)

/not so patiently waiting for an update D: It's been months! Please don't give up!
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