|Reviews for Structurally Unsound|
| rachel garber chapter 1 . 3/7
this is so tragic, loss of communication will doom any relationship and the refusal of each party to step across the divide because he didn't hold me, he didn't understand me, very very sad
| psyfilover chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Wow, how heart wrenching. Just a reminder to be communicative with your partner. Excellent writing. As always.
| Valentine's.day.Ghost chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
Can I give you a hug?
It's been ages since I cried because of a story! This one was incredible!
I don't know how you came up with all of this, but the way you wrote it made me feel closer to them, as if I knew their story and felt their love. It's hard to find a story that doesn't end with a HEA, and although I love realistic endings and emotion-full fics, it'sev en more difficult to find well writen ones.
I truly apreciate you sharing this!
| Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Well written and very sad.
| Nekowingusu chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
This is an amazing story, though extremely sad. It made me cry.
| ColdSilver chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
As soon as I started reading this I had a feeling it was going to make me cry. And you know what? I was right.
| kgq chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
OMG just found your little story and decided to read it I dont do one shots but this one caught my eye and now I see why it was amazing and oh so true when you dont speak your mind and keep things inside all hell can break lose I'm so sorry for them but I do love them thank you for your story
| Taraiha chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
So beautifully written and incredibly sad. You can tell from the storm imagery at the beginning there won't be a HEA. Makes your heart ache for them.
| SeltheWolfie chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Wow, that was really good.
Very truthful and raw.
I really like how you
played it all out.
Another great one. :)
| Kira Kiralina chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Thank you for this story and all your other ones.
| Nisa Cullen chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
so beautiful and so true!
I think I need a hug.
Thanks for writing
| izziey chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
beautifully and frustratingly realistic. really, do we need handbooks or seminars on how to stay in love? i know it's about trust and honesty, but how often does fear and pride get in the way? i want to see them get back together, but honestly, this is more memorable and true. sadly.
| yellowsubmarine17 chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
Wow...that was incredible. I loved that they didn't end up together, sometime there isn't a happy ending...that was so refreshing.
| LunaticV chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
that was.. well, that was well-written, but i don't like the plot.. they should've made up X(
| Lori94 chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
That's so sad!