Reviews for 30 Minutes II: The Gathering Storm
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 16 . 4/20
It has been 12 years since you last updated. Hope you see this updated and finished with a better future. From the other.
As for Albus maybe to get thrown to him about his hubris maybe I need to meet the energy avatar of the Older Harry telling him what happened and why all of humanity was wiped out resulting in basically three survivors. And how they were trying to find a way to undo what happened to save all lives human or otherwise. Plants and animals and all other biological sentient lives were wiped out. And that the Pureblood prejudiced bigots are to blame since he refused to do anything to stop it. Followed by the foolish creation of Artificial intelligence with no safeguards for which thank God Harry had enough dunce to put in place with Sensei even though it is supposed to be an artificial version of him but yet from what remember of the other story before this one With the way it read it gave somewhat the importation as Harry disappeared, he may have merged with his Artificial self. And if so maybe he can reunite with the two kids he raised as his own and trained in hopes of preventing that apocalyptic future.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/12
Once again they point out how much of a dormant Harry is... Even if he is stronger than canon.
OrdinaryMortal chapter 16 . 4/10
Such a shame that this incredible story appears to have been abandoned, yet it remains wort reading despite that. Character and story development are on point in a far more richly developed Potterverse than Canon. Fanratistc writing (although auto-correct has made a few homophone changes which unfortunately have changed the intended meaning, but those are easily parsed and skimmed. Still, if the reason the author hasnt published 60 further chapters on his hard-drive because he needs a beta, I humbly volunteer!
LAB1 chapter 16 . 1/18
I hope your muse someday returns and you come back to this story. I'm very interested in them locating the tower, taking down the horcruxes and Luna 2 and Neville 2 getting back together and hunting down Harry and their father. Such interesting times!
lovethelab chapter 16 . 11/27/2022
I have enjoyed this story right up ntil Neville Jones read teh letter. I am sorry that it has been abandoned and wish you could continue.
Thanks for your story and wish you weel.
CarolsSister chapter 16 . 11/23/2022
For the record, this story (as well as the previous story in this series) has been a delight to read. I knew coming in that this story has been abandoned, but that is e penalty one pays in order to read something that is both well written and original. I am going to mark is as a follow in the event you should happen to return.
CarolsSister chapter 15 . 11/23/2022
Thank you for that very well reasoned take down of an arrogant old manipulative bastard.
Markjmcmurray chapter 16 . 10/22/2022
Amazing story! I truly hope to read more of it soon!
lesa.blazer chapter 14 . 10/17/2022
Please please come back and continue this
morcheller chapter 15 . 10/9/2022
So sad, another great story has died of unknown causes.
I've read it more than once and still love it and wish for more.
SlythMistress chapter 16 . 10/6/2022
I just finished this fic so far. I know it seems abandoned, but I would really love update. I hope you are doing well
Armiture chapter 16 . 10/6/2022
I discovered this series recently and while it has been ten years, I do hope that you get back to this story and complete it one day.

I've really enjoyed this series and at least this chapter ended on a happy note and not an evil cliffhanger, thank you for sharing this with us.
Guest chapter 16 . 10/3/2022
OK, I realize that you haven't updated this in 12 years, but I still have some hope it's just writers block.
This story has elements from another incomplete story of yours, but I don't fault you for that, but am sad that you seem to have abandoned writing.
Penny chapter 16 . 9/19/2022
Really wish you’d finished this one.
LadyKirsten chapter 1 . 9/6/2022
I am following this, even if it seems abandoned for 11 years. I am praying that you return to it and complete it.
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