Reviews for 30 Minutes II: The Gathering Storm
duskglow chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
Please post the "first" chapter soon. At least as a gesture of appreciation to those of us who read all 350,0 words of your previous story. :-) WE WANT TO SEE DUMBLEDORE SMACKED DOWN! :)
Tentrees chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
Thank you for the Holloween treat!

I had thought that Clarice had been in Ravenclaw but this makes it so much more plausable that they whould not have met. Well thought out rather then tell someone to read part one.

And now for the getting ready speil I gave as a crew cheif.

Two minutes out! LOCK AND LOAD! Hang on to you panties girls its going to be a bumpy ride!
Yanagi-wa chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
Yay! More 30 Minutes. I can't wait. The first part was so good.
red-jacobson chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
Look what's happening out in the streets

Got a revolution got to revolution

Hey I'm dancing down the streets

Got a revolution got to revolution

Ain't it amazing all the people I meet

Got a revolution got to revolution

One generation got old

One generation got soul

This generation got no destination to hold

Sorry, but Volunteers by Jefferson Airplane just seemed to be the appropriate music for this new story *GRIN*

Can't you just imagine this playing in the background as mobs storm the Ministry for Magic? *GRIN*

Anyway, thanks for starting to post this so quickly, I hadn't even had a chance to completely re-read the first story.

I'm curious about the addition of the two assistants, are you going to be doing more with them, or are they really and most sincerely dead?

Phoenix Burst chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
I'm so excited that you wrote the sequel right after finishing the first one! Good luck with this one, I can't wait until they start at Hogwarts!
OverzealousDeku chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
This is cool!

I like how you made this like a prologue
martel1 chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
I'm happy that you started "the gathering storm" so soon, a little deluded that the chapter is a backstory but asking someone to read the other story before look at the first chapter is not a good idea.

I hope to see the following chapters soon as this one.

Bye and Thank You.
Sillybookwarm chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
Awesome chapter! I can't wait to see the look on Dumbledore's face when he realizes Harry isn't his pawn anymore... hahahah. Update soon! :D
Cateagle chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
My compliments, a very good summary of the first story. Methinks Albus is going to be more than a little taken aback by the Harry he gets this time, perhaps even moreso because he won't be able to detect that fragment of Tom in him anymore. I'm most definitely looking forward to this new story as the new elements introduced into the situation start to make themselves felt in the magical world; I suspect the three factions of the Ministry & minions, Dumbledore and his minions, and Tom and his Pureblood minions are going to be taken aback by the changed situation they'll be dealing with.
Olaf74 chapter 1 . 10/31/2009


Please continut it very soon!
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