I saw that part 2 wasn’t complete yet, and i hate to start reading a fic only to have it stall… I hit “follow”, so I hope that you finish it someday…

I tried, I really did, bit this is getting far too tiresome, you have a serious exposition problem. Which, while annoying on it's own, is not at all helped by the fact you tend to repeat expositions, and even contradict older ones on occasion. I find myself constantly skipping tens of paragraphs to find any hint of plot progression.

Hell, the first two chapters of this book was recaps of the first book.

Hola gracias x tu historia xfa dale un final.

i hope you can update soon! i love seeing stories where dumbledore gets the runaround and told hes not the center of the universe like he believes.

Me encanta tu historia, ojalá continúes desarrollandola y le des un buen fin, quedo intrigada.

Whelp...glad I didn't read this. Would have been hilariously pissed that 100k words and it only got to November of first year lol.

The first story is worth a read though.

I've enjoyed this story very much. I'm quite in awe of the complex outline , perhaps flowchart, you must work with to keep track of the many characters and plot lines you are juggling. You are an excellent writer and I hope you have time to continue your hobby at some point. And if life takes you in other directions, I consider myself lucky to have enjoyed this work so far as it is. Thanks very much!

First thing I am enjoying this story! I think that you may have been mistaken in using multiple Staves to secure the Great Hall doors. The way you built the “Staves” cape abilities up multiple Stave shields would have made it impossible for fifty Trolls to breakdown the doors.

Just reread both the stories. Great reads. Hope you decide to continue with this one.

Phantombrick

pretty pissed that I read all this without an ending, but I have read part 1 and wanted to see how you were playing things out. I hope you are well and will one day finish this story. or just let us know it's abandoned for all time

Seriously? I could kick myself for not noticing you just abandoned this fic. I have now wasted several days reading a great story that you obviously put much time into but apparently didn't give a shit about your readers and you just vanished. Will not read anything else you wrote now.

I read the first 30 Minutes and just continued on without thinking. I almost always check, and if a story doesn't say "complete" I don't bother wasting my time. Unless, of course, it's a WIP with timely updates. I am sad that I wasted so much time reading this.

You must have had a reason for saying Sally-Ann received two letters, yet you only addressed one of them.

I think this is the third or fourth time I've read this story / series... I hope (but do not expect as it has been nearly 12 years since the last update) that you will be inspired to continue this story at some time...

I am enjoying this story. However, throughout this one and the previous one, you mis-named many known characters. I wonder if it was because you couldn't bother to look them up? I can't take it anymore, LOL! The names were known before you wrote this. (ex: Vector's first name is SEPTIMA, a woman, not a man. Kettleburn is a man, but his name is Silvanus, not Horatio, Bathsheda Babbling taught Ancient Runes). OK, enough nitpicking. I DO like the story a lot.