Reviews for 30 Minutes II: The Gathering Storm
Kai chapter 15 . 9/5/2023
"Yes, Albus. You have read the badly translated English version of a Latin text that was badly translated from Greek, which in turn was badly translated from Persian which was a bad and mostly incomplete translation from the original Chinese. Some of our masters here have learned Chinese and have read the research material in its original. All of us Eastern Defence Masters know the Japanese translation which is described by those who do read Chinese as complete and correct. So you have thousands of Defence Masters over the last two thousand years with about fifty of them in this room. And yet, your almighty wisdom is so powerful and perfect that you and you alone can guess the absolute truth out of a text fragment that has absolutely no similarity to the original literature. And all those thousands of experts, some of which have dealt with horcruxes over all that time must surely be mistaken. Is that what you think? You don't show wisdom, Albus my boy, it is called hubris and megalomania. Uneducated moron!"
Holy Hannah chapter 16 . 9/5/2023
Though long abandoned this story and it predecessor bring me great joy. Thank you and should the muse ever strike again I’ll be here to read the further adventures.
Guest chapter 16 . 8/9/2023
Please continue this story. It's too good to leave unfinished!
mumphie chapter 15 . 7/19/2023
I'm really sad that it has been twelve years since your last update. I do not know why, real life being busy, illness, or death. I would have loved to see what happened next.
mumphie chapter 9 . 7/19/2023
Wondering if Sally-Anne's parents will ever be held responsible for abandonment? What a cowardly pair, they are! I can see Office W taking care of thing!
TennysonPoet chapter 16 . 6/10/2023
Are you going to be adding to this wonderful story? I love it I have re read it and the prequel many times but I would like to read the next sections. Please.
mlj11100 chapter 16 . 6/5/2023
Je viens de découvrir cette histoire après avoir lu la précédente. J'adore ! J'espère que vous ne l'avez pas abandonnée, ce serait vraiment dommage.
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 16 . 4/20/2023
It has been 12 years since you last updated. Hope you see this updated and finished with a better future. From the other.
As for Albus maybe to get thrown to him about his hubris maybe I need to meet the energy avatar of the Older Harry telling him what happened and why all of humanity was wiped out resulting in basically three survivors. And how they were trying to find a way to undo what happened to save all lives human or otherwise. Plants and animals and all other biological sentient lives were wiped out. And that the Pureblood prejudiced bigots are to blame since he refused to do anything to stop it. Followed by the foolish creation of Artificial intelligence with no safeguards for which thank God Harry had enough dunce to put in place with Sensei even though it is supposed to be an artificial version of him but yet from what remember of the other story before this one With the way it read it gave somewhat the importation as Harry disappeared, he may have merged with his Artificial self. And if so maybe he can reunite with the two kids he raised as his own and trained in hopes of preventing that apocalyptic future.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/12/2023
Once again they point out how much of a dormant Harry is... Even if he is stronger than canon.
OrdinaryMortal chapter 16 . 4/10/2023
Such a shame that this incredible story appears to have been abandoned, yet it remains wort reading despite that. Character and story development are on point in a far more richly developed Potterverse than Canon. Fanratistc writing (although auto-correct has made a few homophone changes which unfortunately have changed the intended meaning, but those are easily parsed and skimmed. Still, if the reason the author hasnt published 60 further chapters on his hard-drive because he needs a beta, I humbly volunteer!
LAB1 chapter 16 . 1/18/2023
I hope your muse someday returns and you come back to this story. I'm very interested in them locating the tower, taking down the horcruxes and Luna 2 and Neville 2 getting back together and hunting down Harry and their father. Such interesting times!
lovethelab chapter 16 . 11/27/2022
I have enjoyed this story right up ntil Neville Jones read teh letter. I am sorry that it has been abandoned and wish you could continue.
Thanks for your story and wish you weel.
CarolsSister chapter 16 . 11/23/2022
For the record, this story (as well as the previous story in this series) has been a delight to read. I knew coming in that this story has been abandoned, but that is e penalty one pays in order to read something that is both well written and original. I am going to mark is as a follow in the event you should happen to return.
CarolsSister chapter 15 . 11/23/2022
Thank you for that very well reasoned take down of an arrogant old manipulative bastard.
Markjmcmurray chapter 16 . 10/22/2022
Amazing story! I truly hope to read more of it soon!
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