Reviews for Almost Lost
TwistedNeiviv chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
That was great!
Bella Gattino chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
Fuck me... God damn it. That was HOT as hell. *mumbles incoherently*
SexyMalMal chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
wow that was... steamy. i loved it.. thanks for writing it :D
alxandrabb chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
favorite one shot by far! i love this
WardenAmyBee chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
u so own me now lol
Kerry Hale chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
So very hot. I love how you did the flashback. Greatness
xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
I Loved This! it was really good!
SimplyPixie chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
GREAT! I love seeing Emmett as a father. I am sorry but this is the pairing that should be! Edward sucks! LOL
AlteredLionsSacrificialLambs chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
Here is our review from our blog:

Whew! Talk about HOT!/*fans self. This one shot is definitely that. She actual has three Bella/Emmett one shots and it was hard to pick just one, but this one was so hot I couldn't pass it up. You know I like my smut!

It starts off in the present, with Emmett getting home from work. Seeing his family in bed, he reflects on the best and worst night of his life, when he almost lost it all.

Cue the flashback to that night. Emmett was a bad boy. After a regretful argument, he just wants to drown in his sorrows and figure out what to do next. He finally ends up drowning them in the beautiful woman who comes to sit at the bar.

The cab ride to his house is amazingly hot. I can just imagine being her, with his hand up my skirt and his voice in my ear. Then there is when they get, barely, in the door to his house and can't make it any further. Then there is the couch, and the kitchen floor. Eventually they make it to the bed and there's even more! Did I mention the lemons in this story? It's fuckhot.

Finally, with his body and heart sated, we return to present day and, yes, ANOTHER LEMON. Even with all this sexing going on, the story is still there. Reflections of times gone wrong that lead us to the best moments of our lives, and turning points that put our lives on track.
purple swerl chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
hot!
TDTwifan chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
Good Bella and Emmett fun. For a while I wasn't sure that Bella was his girlfriend or a girl he just picked up. Loved it.
xXxlizardxXx chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
ah! that was a great story! well done!

Liz

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Twilight-ObsessedDiva chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
OMFG that was yummy lol im speechless wow ok that was.