Reviews for Beg the Universe
The Gooseberry Catastrophe Is Me chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Oh my god. That was so chilling! Really great suspense/horror idea. _ Please continue!
Flight-of-the-Nightingales chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
This is amazing! It would've made a great story! You should continue it!
mizgardenia21 chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
Arnie is creepy. Go get him Helga! Awesome story. Chilling and suspenseful in all the right places.
rejectsuperstar chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
OH MAN. This was chilling! I love this!
T.L. Battle chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
Whoa! Very creative and suspenseful. I loved how you kept Helga in character, even in the interesting situation. It's an excellently original one-shot and I especially liked how you kept it with a cliffhanger ending.

Fantastic job!
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
Whoa... creepy!

Keep the good writing.
Pointy Objects chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
My heart is beating so fast right now.

How you managed to surprise me numerous times in this was amazing, in and of itself. I read the warning at the top of 'prestory non-con', and althought it wasn't obvious, I could still detect hints of it now and again.

Wow, that was amazing, and completely scary. ugh. Arnie. Ugh. the twists.

You're great. That was great. I'm gonna go lie down now.-Pointy_O
Liz chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
NO! That can't be the end! It can't be!

That's so not cool.

But I was sitting on the edge of my seat while reading this. You have a knack for suspense.

kev1000 chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
Nice! I like this! I like how it's open ended, but I have a feeling that Helga's going to go all Ripley on this freak. Great job!