Reviews for Amber Hell
katiebee93 chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
Wow! This is a great story. My only critique is that I didn't necessarily like hearing the same thing from both points of view because it got a bit repetitive. Other than that though I thought this was absolutely fantastic, it left my heart beating faster when I was done with it! Great job and keep it up :)
Book2romantic chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
I didn't really like the format, but that's just personal preference, right?

I thought it was a very interesting story, and I really hope that you make it into more than a one shot. These characters deserve to have more than the tiny bit of back story we got here.
my2galspal chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
Whoa. That was pretty intense. Thanks for sharing your writing. Best of luck in the contest.
bugsmama07 chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
this definately a different darkward/dom edward than i'm used to reading about. great one shot! loved it!
Darkward - In The Dark chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
Thanks for entering the contest. Best of luck.