Reviews for Take A Ride With Me
The Red Courage chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Great story!
Hypnosbutterfly chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
Wow, that was absolutely... appalling and awesome at the same time. I'm so very glad that he didn't do it!
JazzyCat chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Not a fan of that pairing, but this was too cute a story to hate. The idea of him being a serial-rapist of sorts does raise the question of Fran's thoughts on this, if she knows at all. She seems too perceptive a character NOT to know, y'know?

But that is just my wondering, I suppose. It was very well written and adorable. :)
mikkimikka chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
really cute story. i loved it. i knew balthier was a good guy at heart. penelo's too sweet to do wrong to.
sewga89 chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
Great oneshot. I thought Balthier was little creepy, but still a great story.
bluebear13sg chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
I love your story!

Although Balthier's intention at first is a little creepy, but I like how he change his mind because of Penelo.

Definitely one of the best one-shots.

GitaMerah chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
What a fresh take on how Balthier & Penelo might've met! It's pretty good, although your depiction of Balthier is a little disturbing. I was kinda afraid for Penelo for awhile. Are you planning on continuing this or is this it?