|Reviews for Ignore the past Concentrate on the present|
| 101spacemonkey chapter 2 . 7/16/2011
get him Jack!
| 101spacemonkey chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
that was heart breaking!
| obsydiandreams chapter 2 . 10/1/2010
...oh gods poor ianto. jack's gonna have to treat him right, after that. damn. can't wait for more... this is pretty intense.
| Lady Emma Wentworth chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
This is one story that needs continuation like no other I have ever read!
I have to know how Jack fixes this; does jack hurt anyone else; Jack and jack need a confrontation: real old-fashioned good versus evil stuff.
Jack needs to show Ianto that he really his knight in shining armour.
| rosie chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
plez wright more plez
| marajade963 chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
I think you've rushed the beginning too much.
What you have here is either the middle of the story or the end depending on what you want from the story. I'd like to see some sort of conclusion to it, but that's just me. Even if you don't explain everything and make umpty-ump chapters to explain why 'he's' there in the hub, you could still do with with expanding the beginning by a few chapters.
Don't get me wrong. I did think the story was all right, jut that I'd picked it up mid-story.
| jantoloverxx chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
aww! come on u must be doing another chapter this can't be complete, jack has to explain :(