Reviews for Gravitational Potential
cjh4ever chapter 3 . 11/3/2009
I shall never look at duct tape in the same way again ... And Ianto's back!

cjh4ever chapter 2 . 11/3/2009
Oh, poor Jack. You've caught his sadness and ... desolation, I suppose, so well. And the Doctor is spot on. Hope they stay on this new world for a while.

pinksocks chapter 2 . 11/3/2009
Wow. That description of the city was beautiful. It sounded a bit like when the Doctor described Gallafrey. Definitely my favourite part so far.

milady dragon chapter 2 . 11/2/2009
This is so sad. Poor Jack, and poor Doctor for wanting to help and failing.
Ysaedda chapter 2 . 11/2/2009

Now that is brilliant. And so true xD Hit it hard enough with a small mallet, and maybe it'll work properly.
LiquidLash chapter 2 . 11/2/2009
Zebra! *giggles like mad*

And I also spotted the nano-dare like 'you're allowed to have the inital reaction of wanting to punch him'... heehee. Must still use that one myself.

Keep it up hun, you're doing great! :D
Somewhere's Sword chapter 2 . 11/2/2009
Aww, poor Jack :/ Though it does amuse me that you have an alien queen saying 'meh' xp

Keep going!

Lucy x
Pirate Moose chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
Heartbreaking and beautiful. You've captured the characters really well :)

hotflower901 chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
jen-hi chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
A very promising beginning. Can't wait to read where the travel will go to. And I like the flashbacks. Small moments, but beautiful.
Orion Lyonesse chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
Good start. Eager to see where it goes.

Good luck with the writing challenge.

Keep writing!
rosieposy chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
Great start. Jack is so broken hope the Doctor can help in some small way. Good luck on your madcap ride that is NaNoWriMo will be with you all the way. :)
LiquidLash chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
And I love you so much. The imagery, the prose, the beautifully heart wrenching hurts...

Can't wait for mower, hun!
pinksocks chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
The drumroll was definitely needed, that was a brill opening. I'm looking forwards to reading a chapter a day. I'm such a hippocrite when it comes to updating, I NEVER update mine and then have a fit of writting and end up with two or three chapters. Argh, that ruined my make up. See, I can't read post COE fics when I'm emotional. Oh well, I'm not going anywhere. I wont say please update soon because I know you will ;-)

Somewhere's Sword chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
And so the madness begins...

Though it won't begin for me till tomorrow :P

Awesome start, and as I know the plot ahead you've definitely got me hooked :) Good luck!

L x
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