|Reviews for Those They Left Behind|
| WeasleyGrangerPotter chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
This was ... amazing. I'm crying and feeling really depressed now. I need some choctolate! But that was truly amazing. it really covered all their feelings and ... sniff, wow, I'm gonna go get some chocolate to cheer me up. Amazing.
| WhimsicallyAwkward chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
Very sad but very good. I think you portrayed all the characters brilliantly.
| Stephanie O chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
Very sad, and somewhat depressing, but I think you did a good job on this. I think I figured out who all the people were in each section as well, though some were a bit trickier than others! Thanks for writing!
| deleted111 chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
| ginny hale chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
yeah its depressing but it was also touching and sad.
| BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
A great story. Very well written.
| Morgan262 chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
That was beautiful, i loved it! I almost cried, which is saying something because i NEVER EVER cry over a book(or fanfic).
| James3Lily chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
It was...good.I was going to say nice but it seems too sad for that.
| Accio-Cavy chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
Okay, so about halfway through I figured out what you were doing with the titles and I had to go back up and re-read it because it made me go !_
I love your descriptive style, and the subtlety with which you execute your fic. It was a great glimpse into a couple of minds, and you really didn't break character, which made me more happy! Also, I love how you treated Regalus just like any other character we've met in the series; he wasn't paid more attention because we really don't know much about him. And I also love how you brought it all full circle.
I'd love to give criticism on this, but I honestly can't. It was very, very well done. Excellent tone, excellent description and word choice, and excellent set-up.
On that note, I would like to refer you to a creative roleplaying site called Rocky Mountain International (w. rmimagic .com). From this story it looks like you'd fit in wonderfully with the other creative writers there, and I think they need a staff member right now too. You should definitely take a look. :)
| FriendofMolly chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
This writing was Awesome. The subject matter sad,depressing, introspective, very very deep. I am agog with your talent.
| GundamPilot03 chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
That was sad. It almost made me cry. But it was also wonderfully written and I loved it.