|Reviews for Card Captor Harry, Season Two|
| Ramenth chapter 4 . 2/21/2011
Glad to see this finally updated. The new chapter has been on my too read list for a while, but I've only just gotten around to it.
I am of two minds when it comes to both this and the other recent (Well, sortof recent) chapters. It was, of course, inevitable that Hermione and Ron would find out about the Clow Cards, but at the same time I feel like telling them takes away one of the few parts of this story that set it aside from the other Harry Potter fics out there. I can't really think of a way for you to both keep the feel of the story how it was in the first two parts, and also keep Ron and Hermione in the know. I am glad to see that Keeper is gone. As much as I like that series, I like this without him more.
So, yeah. I don't know. I'm glad to see an update, but I'm worried you're going to end up changing this story too much for me to handle.
| Cloud Dancer1014 chapter 4 . 2/18/2011
-I've been behind a lot on a few things, so excuse me for the late reviews. That said, I can feasibly see Hermione feeling like this. The bonus on Harry's side is that the odd hours, life-threatening issues, and Harry's norm psyche works for him. In fact, if Ron and Hermione wait until the first task, things would be even more obvious. Face it, a fire breathing dragon is a bit much, even for adult wizards. A fourth year, facing one? That must prove that Dumbledore isn't all there.
Dream, Maze, Return, Freeze and Illusion could also press the point. I'm sure that most weren't captured yet, so a very dangerous card could help reinforce the sense of danger facing Harry. In fact, might I suggest Freeze getting in on the Second Task? Unmeltable Ice would really shake the Wizards up.
Happy writing, and do NOT delay the next update. I will hunt you down and force you to write if need be.
Oh, and update Akanema while you're at it.
| divad relffehs chapter 4 . 2/18/2011
This is the first story of yours that I read and still my favorite. Update please.
| Dragon Man 180 chapter 4 . 2/16/2011
I agree Hermione has a bit of reason to feel betrayed, but hopefully some research will help bring her around. I can't wait to see how the tasks go for our Card Captor. Especially if the next card shows up in the middle of one.
| twinkletoes chapter 4 . 2/16/2011
...this is me gawking in absolute shock. To be completely honest, I had kind of given up hope that you'd ever update this one...granted, I'm more or less ecstatic to be wrong about that, but still... Everything and the kitchen sink taking precedence over this one fic will do that, I suppose. Oh well, that's neither here nor there. Here's to hoping that you'll have luck in writing this and your other fics (hopefully your not-magical-girl fics, even though those are good, too, since those are the ones that you've stuck to updating for the last several...wow, it's already months?)
| Ryuus2 chapter 4 . 2/16/2011
I really want to comment about how I questioned you on the Potters and you updated within a day, but I don't think I can afford to let my ego get away with that. I have a lot more important stuff to do than let myself preen.
Moving on...It's great to see Harry in action again. It’s been so long, I forgot how good a fighter he was under your pen.
Ugh. Jealous Ron. Don’t get me wrong, I don’t hate the guy. I understand where he’s coming from completely and wouldn’t wish his baggage on my lesser enemies. And love him or hate him, he always comes back in the end. You’ve gotta respect him for that. It’s just that, he brings out Harry’s emo, and I hate emo Harry. He’s dull, he’s whiny, he’s mopey, and all around he drives me up a wall.
Hermione is perfectly within character. Most people don’t realize that she’s in the same boat as Harry: she has few friends, and she holds them desperately close. And with their tendency to get themselves in deadly trouble, she takes it on herself to be the responsible one. So of course when she finds out Harry is hiding incredibly dangerous weapons from her, she’s gonna flip.
And Harry is equally understandable. He’s a protector: he’ll do anything to protect his friends, even keep them in the dark about himself, personal consequences be damned. And he does deserve his secrets. The guy’s earned them.
All in all, a very moving representation of the intrinsic dynamic between the characters at the core of the Harry Potter series.
Now, all seriousness aside. You made Change switch Ron and Lee. Bwahahahaha~! Oh I can just picture it in my head! Lee’s body freaking out and Ron’s is practically stripping hers to get at all of Lee’s non-standard toys to chase after Change. Hahahaha! Incredible!
I can’t wait to see the fallout from this chapter. Especially how Ron and Hermione react to how the cards intersect with Harry and Lee. Hermione’s earlier examples of perversion will be nothing when compared to handing her the live grenade that situation is, kukukuku.
And then there’s Keeper. Aside from suggesting they bribe Power with candy and feeding Kero chocolate he hasn’t really done anything. And that is just weird. The explicit lack of perversion and explosions is anathema to his existence and inclusion in a fic. Just what is he getting up to?
Keep up the great work!
| Macavity Omega chapter 4 . 2/16/2011
About time you started updating your older stories.
Seriously, finish what you've started.
If you really feel like doing a short omake story, do a collection of them.
| Sorakage Sama chapter 4 . 2/16/2011
Wow! An update at last. This was arguably one of the most dramatic chapters yet, and I can't wait to see what happens after all this drama.
| SetoKibasPhoenix900 chapter 3 . 2/1/2011
more, i want more! this is absuotly hilarious! please update this! If you don't mind could you check out my stories and give your opion
| BlackRose-FlowerofDeath chapter 3 . 1/19/2011
Can't wait or the next chappie on this!
| Sailor Yin Yang chapter 3 . 1/4/2011
iv loved the story so far but one question comes to mind when i remember which cards are left. Is The Change going to be a background card or will it get its own embarassing chapter
| TempestReign chapter 3 . 11/10/2010
really awesome story!
| Progos chapter 3 . 10/14/2010
Goodness Gracious Great Balls of Fire!
Speaking of Girl Genius crossovers, I need to check if anyone's done one with Revolutionary Girl Utena. I mean, come on! Revolutionary Girl Genius Utena! Who can pass something like that up?
I look forward to the next chapter, whenever it comes.
| EspyLacopa chapter 3 . 9/14/2010
Hmmm. Wonder who's going to end up being Yue. (which is likely rather obvious given what Yue means and the parallels with the anime/manga)
| Cloud Dancer1014 chapter 3 . 6/23/2010
-Interesting. You truly are a genius.
Harry's luck, however, has been too good. By now, Hermione ought to be getting curious as to his changes in attitude, and now that she has more time to watch Harry, it will soon become clear to her that he has become more tense and responsible, as you put it.
Also, it's a wonder a card hasn't popped up and swept Hermione and Ginny into trouble.
One more thing: That self-insert that our trio of heroes got swept up in . . . whatever happened to it? Don't ask me why, but I got the feeling that maybe Moon was going for another threesome pairing . . . which, in terms of the relationship between Lee and Harry, ought to make things even more complex.
Happy writing, and update soon!