|Reviews for Harry Potter: Connections|
| Anon chapter 4 . 10/2/2012
"No, she basically asked me if you made me scream." replied Ginny.
I'm sorry I have a dirty mind, but that had me giggling.
Otherwise a very well constructed story, you don't make the plotline seem flat which is a bonus, and sets the story apart from other fics with good plotlines but bad dialogue.
| Marcus S. Lazarus chapter 10 . 3/14/2012
The prologue continued to provide intriguing-yet-inconclusive clues as to what happened during that dark Halloween night, and the rest of the plot was just as interesting, I assure you.
A bit unclear on how Adam ended up in a muggle home despite his requests and McGonagall’s promises, but given the typical Ministry-demonstrated incompetence in such areas I suppose that it’s always possible that someone REALLY screwed up, and the possibilities presented by Dumbledore’s ‘assignment’ for Lupin and Adam’s subsequent decision to go to the Weasleys certainly make up for that ambiguity.
Kind of sucks that Adam wasn’t first choice for Seeker, but his reasons for missing out on the opportunity make sense, and at least he got the chance later on to show what he can do in that regard anyway.
In general, Lupin’s investigation into Adam’s past was also good, each step leading relatively neatly into the next as he determined where Adam was at the start and how he ended up in the condition that he was in when McGonagall found him, but given the circumstances under which he developed his ‘phobia’ about his magic I’m almost surprised it took Adam such a relatively quick amount of time to get over it once he started at Hogwarts (Speaking from experience, that kind of experience is never easy to get over, and the fact that Adam never even did anything apart from wanting to keep a hold of his things makes it even worse)...
Still, Buckbeak’s rescue and the subsequent escape from Malfoy and MacNair certainly worked out well, and Dumbledore’s reasons for keeping his heritage secret so far seem to make sense, to say nothing of the implications of how nobody was able to find him earlier (Even if the EXACT circumstances that led to Harry/Adam being found in the park are still a mystery, beginning with why Wormtail took him anywhere and moving on from there)...
Keep up the good work!
| i-sse96 chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
Good Chapter. i enjoyed it
| TxA-GunFighter chapter 4 . 1/23/2012
| Black Stripes chapter 10 . 12/20/2011
Still a very good story :) I hope Adam will stay anonymous a little longer
| simys chapter 10 . 8/5/2011
again its brulyint i'm sorry i don't review every chapter but its to good to stop you have amazing talent i love the way you can fit them into the old scraps in a vary original way _
| Lexi0521 chapter 10 . 5/30/2011
Wonderful story! I can hardly wait to read your next installment!
Thank you for sharing your gifted talents!
| mydarkillusion chapter 4 . 2/6/2011
"Molly, that assumes that different departments of the Ministry actually talk to each other," Mr Weasley replied dryly.
yes god or perhaps Merlin forbid the left wand hand know what the right wand is doing worthy of an Snape snerk
| Jim Red Hawk chapter 9 . 11/19/2010
Hi, my name is Jim and I have been reading your stories and enjoying them, except for on minor detail. I ended up reading some of them out of order simply cause I could not tell what the correct order is. That might be because I am a stroke survivor & that causes all kinds of problems for me. I suspect having them numbered 1, 2, 3, etc would solve that problem for me and others. :} I hope you will consider doing that.
| Blosiom chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
this is nice i realy enkoyed the whole story.
| AwkwardGirl chapter 6 . 11/8/2010
-twitch twitch- ginny was never suppose to be a pro at quidditch...HARRY WAS(P.s) just guessing adams harry over here)! HE WAS SUPPOSE TO BE A PRODIGY! but you made him wrose! even if you do make him get better then ginny over time, its not the same as him being the best on his first try! whys ginny so good anyway :P HARRYS BETTER! maybe this fanfic isnt for me...hahaha...ya... still mad at you, author person! -twitch twitch, cry cry-
| harlequin320 chapter 10 . 10/9/2010
| madd09 chapter 10 . 10/2/2010
good story :)
| Kelliekins chapter 7 . 8/16/2010
Only realised after reading your 6th potter story? That you had one for every year! Lol You hadn't specified at the beginning, so now i'm reading through all the previous ones! They're quick to the point. And I like that!
I felt the need to review because of your mention of Musgrove Hospital in Taunton ... :) I was born there, and only live about 20 minutes away now! Made me smile! :)
Anywhoo keep up the good work!
| Ninpha chapter 10 . 7/2/2010
grrr. Sometimes I hate Dumbledore. Great Story!