|Reviews for Check your Pockets|
| 123kat chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
I love the phrase "Little brother has left the building."
great writing. The story is just so innocent and non supernatural it made me chuckle.
| twilightrayne chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
Good story, a great addition to the stories you have already posted. Had a small funny little twist at the end that had me in stitches for about 5 minutes. Probably one of your best yet.
| Wicked Rebel chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
those boys are so cute when they are mad! and you write them so well :)
im so dean in this situation:
Poster-boy for miserable.
Epitome of failure.
| KKBELVIS chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
“Little brother has left the building.”
Ah - the dreaded ink-stain!
I thought this was a fantastic idea. I adore how you extended the story. I could feel the tension between the brothers and the stares of the other patrons - nice added detail. Also, loved how Dean took charge - getting everyone to stop staring.
The way you bookended this story...starting with Sam's poster-boy - miserable and ending on Dean's posterboy - miserable - very smart!
I most certainly would love to see Dean make this up to Sam! Very, very nice, normal brother story! I enjoyed alot!
PS: Can't wait for your 'drunk' Sammy story! Sounds great!