Reviews for Check your Pockets
123kat chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
I love the phrase "Little brother has left the building."

great writing. The story is just so innocent and non supernatural it made me chuckle.

Thanks,

Kat
twilightrayne chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
Good story, a great addition to the stories you have already posted. Had a small funny little twist at the end that had me in stitches for about 5 minutes. Probably one of your best yet.
Wicked Rebel chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
those boys are so cute when they are mad! and you write them so well :)

im so dean in this situation:

Dejected.

Poster-boy for miserable.

Epitome of failure.

freaking pens.

Lora/"Toni"
KKBELVIS chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
“Little brother has left the building.”

LOL...cute.

Ah - the dreaded ink-stain!

I thought this was a fantastic idea. I adore how you extended the story. I could feel the tension between the brothers and the stares of the other patrons - nice added detail. Also, loved how Dean took charge - getting everyone to stop staring.

The way you bookended this story...starting with Sam's poster-boy - miserable and ending on Dean's posterboy - miserable - very smart!

I most certainly would love to see Dean make this up to Sam! Very, very nice, normal brother story! I enjoyed alot!

Thank you,

Karen

PS: Can't wait for your 'drunk' Sammy story! Sounds great!