Reviews for Escaping a Cat and Mouse Game
Toph Hitsugaya chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
with Jake, do you mean Josh? Jake was the garage owner

I like this ending, I prefer it. espiecally the cat and mouse game part at the end of Mouse's segmnt
Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
Are you serious? That is too depressing!
fork104 chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
OMG, this sounds like an awsome story, please continue it! I Can't believe Jake is gonna die! I CANT WAIT! YAY!
Lucinda Primrose Belacqua chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
So sad but sweet... Maybe write a sequel?
cherry722 chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
Your story was great!

a very interesting ending i love fan fiction because you get great storys on here!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
hey gud ending but y dont u carry on i cant wait 2 read da rest

i want to no if she forgiven

also caN U TELL ME WHERE I CAN GET DA BOOK

THX
IthinkIthinktoomuch chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
Well THIS was depressing. The Mouse part I really didn't like. But Cat's part was awesome.

All in all I didn't really like your ending. Sorry, sad endings depress me :(

But I do love the writing. :D (Y)
redacted357123123462 chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
I think I like your ending better.
RainboLuck chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
It's been a while since I read Lucky Star, but I THINK I didn't like the ending, either. I like yours :)
Justin Bieber loves you chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
lol sorry I thought this was lucky star whats with the mice and cat
FantasyXDayDreamer chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
This was awesome~

I love Lucky Star! It's one of my faveroute books 3 x] hehe

The ending is so sad, but it's really effective, it's really good! :D

Keep up the good work!

~FantasyXDayDreamer
Edwardfan1997 chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
wow! amazing! i usually read twilight ffs but this is...just fantabutastic!
Straight Down From Heaven chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
I love it!

but why did mouse break up with cat?