Reviews for Escaping a Cat and Mouse Game
Elizabeth chapter 1 . 12/30/2016
This made me cry, so glad the book didn't end like this. Kat and Mouse are my OTP and forever will be. But although this broke me, its extremely well written. Like, amazing, you really have talent.
Toph Hitsugaya chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
with Jake, do you mean Josh? Jake was the garage owner

I like this ending, I prefer it. espiecally the cat and mouse game part at the end of Mouse's segmnt
Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
Are you serious? That is too depressing!
fork104 chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
OMG, this sounds like an awsome story, please continue it! I Can't believe Jake is gonna die! I CANT WAIT! YAY!
Lucinda Primrose Belacqua chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
So sad but sweet... Maybe write a sequel?
cherry722 chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
Your story was great!

a very interesting ending i love fan fiction because you get great storys on here!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
hey gud ending but y dont u carry on i cant wait 2 read da rest

i want to no if she forgiven


IthinkIthinktoomuch chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
Well THIS was depressing. The Mouse part I really didn't like. But Cat's part was awesome.

All in all I didn't really like your ending. Sorry, sad endings depress me :(

But I do love the writing. :D (Y)
redacted357123123462 chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
I think I like your ending better.
RainboLuck chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
It's been a while since I read Lucky Star, but I THINK I didn't like the ending, either. I like yours :)
Justin Bieber loves you chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
lol sorry I thought this was lucky star whats with the mice and cat
FantasyXDayDreamer chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
This was awesome~

I love Lucky Star! It's one of my faveroute books 3 x] hehe

The ending is so sad, but it's really effective, it's really good! :D

Keep up the good work!

Edwardfan1997 chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
wow! amazing! i usually read twilight ffs but this is...just fantabutastic!
Straight Down From Heaven chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
I love it!

but why did mouse break up with cat?