Reviews for Unlocking Destiny
Jonathan Dupont chapter 1 . 8/14/2000
Maybe it could have had a little more detail in it; but quite good.
StarDragon chapter 1 . 8/9/2000
Very, very good! I enjoyed it. It was well written.
MarinKoholint chapter 1 . 8/9/2000
This is soo good! Mizra, I think we will see good works from you! I really like how you described the moment when he found the Master Sword. It could have been a bit longer but otherwise it was wonderful and delicious! Write more! And feel free to email me!
The Kirby Kid chapter 1 . 8/8/2000
Heyyyy...this was pretty nice. I forgot about that scene in the game. There were a few mechanical problems here and there. Like...use spaces between paragraghs, and I think Link's thoughts should be in quotes. You know what would have been cool, if it had ended with the horror of finding out that LINK was the cause of Ganondorf entering the Sacred Realm, and Ganondorf shoving that in his face. That was a real freaky part of the game. (v-)
Mizra chapter 1 . 8/8/2000
I did better on this one, I think, then most of them!