Reviews for Is It Fun Playing On The Battlefield, Shinigami?
Wonderland chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
Great poem, about my favorite GW character even. I think that most people just see the jokes that Duo says and don't realize that there is a lot of pain underneath. He didn't pick Shinigami because he thought it sounded cool. Keep writing.
4810 chapter 1 . 1/19/2002
Oh...that was so sad...;; I like Duo...Makes me feel sowwy for him.
irishais chapter 1 . 1/15/2002
wow, that was freaking powerful! LIKED MUCHO!
Deux Maxwell chapter 1 . 1/15/2002
Cool...i like it..a nice lil' summary of Duo's lifestyle..very good -
aurani chapter 1 . 1/15/2002
Pree-tty good...

Smiling, cutting another lifethread swiftly with his scythe/Is it fun playing on the battlefield, Shinigami?/Or is that twinkling in your eyes not laughter, but tears?

first line, summary of the whole poem- you dont need to be so redundant! but the last two lines were good... cept, mind you, sorrow does not twinkle... still, I think the idea was great. Keep at it-practice, practice, practice makes perfect.
Krylancelo chapter 1 . 1/15/2002
Creepy but good
Cobalt Violet chapter 1 . 1/15/2002
I must say this is...beautiful, it's so poignant and sad...it speaks words yet says nothing...sorry going off on a little thing there, basically what I'm saying is I like this a lot.