Reviews for Bathwater |
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![]() ![]() My god, I’ve never read something that hurt my brain as much as this. Just no, throw the whole fic away. |
![]() ![]() ![]() In the beginning, I thought it was Draco and Hermione. I should have realized it was luna and Dean. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story! But why's it called Bathwater though? Did miss any important detail? |
![]() ![]() This is honestly one of the most poorly written stories that I have ever read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry and Ginny got off too easy. |
![]() ![]() Jesus Christ! Get a fucking beta! Maybe they could make sense of this goddamn train wreck of a story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Entertaining and well-written... |
![]() ![]() Draco is an absolutely irredeemable character. He has no, and I mean ABSOLUTELY NO good qualities. I was routing for Hermione to lose her memories just to spite him. Your Draco deserves to live the rest of his life alone. The only reason that I finished this abomination of a story was because of Blaise. I saw that there’s a sequel, but I refuse to put myself through anymore of your poorly written characters. |
![]() ![]() You describe everyone by their hair color, (the blonde, the brunette, or the redhead) and you do it sometimes multiple times per paragraph. Holy shit it is exhausting to read. There are like 50 fucking Weasleys, you can’t just say “the redhead”. You also overuse their house affiliations to an annoying degree. Describing someone as “the Slytherin” is confusing and can take the reader out of the story. I would have turned it into a drinking game and taken a sip every time you did it, but I would be dead. |
![]() ![]() Really good! Deep and heartbreaking, but HILARIOUS too. Ugh ministry! What kind of stupid rule is that that you have to marry and produce heirs?! At least u get paired with your soulmate.. Gosh Blaise is actually my fave character in this. He is super funny. And annoying haha. Good job author. I will be reading this again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was adorable and thoroughly entertaining. Cheers. |
![]() ![]() What? She had sex with Draco? |
![]() ![]() ME NEITHER |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol Blaise... |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww |