Reviews for Bathwater
mary-loki chapter 6 . 11/14/2009
hi! your story is really good, I like it )

m I want to know what is going to happen now!

ao hope you can post the next chap soon, yeah?

kisses, bye!
RoryAceHayden147 chapter 6 . 11/14/2009
Ha!

Nice chapter!

Update asap!

Au revoir!
Miss Junie chapter 6 . 11/14/2009
Haha, awesome! I love how Draco's trying to act civilly and Hermione's so annoyed! Great character portrayal, awesome story, AMAZING job!
spikeecat chapter 6 . 11/14/2009
Poor Slytherins! I'm not too sure they can handle the Gryffindors but it will be fun to watch them try. Please update again soon.
TheColdFlame chapter 6 . 11/14/2009
yay i ve it
Raph Weasley chapter 6 . 11/14/2009
oh! more!

D
Theta23 chapter 6 . 11/13/2009
AWESOME STORY!
ihatetosayitoldyouso chapter 6 . 11/13/2009
hahaha i love this so far! update soon :D
Raph Weasley chapter 5 . 11/12/2009
Poor Lavender. Man. This is sad, yet I really like it. D Poor Ronald. I hope things start to look up for him and his attitude soon!

)

Update soon, please!
agnam-ticcda555 chapter 5 . 11/12/2009
nice story... write more soon :)
OrangeJuice7 chapter 5 . 11/12/2009
awesome!

more plz!:)
TheColdFlame chapter 5 . 11/12/2009
Hey i love it! keep writing!
voldyismyfather chapter 5 . 11/12/2009
love it

i like the bit at the end about the salt and the speaking terms
chercherlecirque chapter 5 . 11/11/2009
Awesome.

Ron is like...totally off the hook. I can't wait to see how he and Pansy turn out.
the rose has thorns chapter 5 . 11/11/2009
very nice chapter! shows a good succession of events and has me waiting for the next one eagerly! D

just one tip: you might want to lighten up on indenting so many words. I used to do the same thing, because when you hear it in your head, you want the emphasis to be on certain words right, in the dialogue? but when the reader is reading it, not all of them are necessary. just some advice. ]
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