I really like that her first feeling was embarrassment and betrayal. Most PWP stories would just have her ignore it and immediately lead to sex. Working through their feelings and misconceptions made this so much better and easier to get into.

Smexy little one-shot; Hhhmmm, lemons..."

That Is some Good Shit.

That was absolutely adorable, loved it

I loved the build up, the complicatedness despite it being a smut fic. Yeah no, the pacing was quite superb. I was actually afraid the couple were going to rush into it. The level of awkwardness was good too. Oh, and that you still kept it as them being friends - them feeling that way about it in that situation, at least. It was interesting and refreshing. The hesitation in it all - you balanced that quite well. This is probably the most convincing Harmony story I’ve read. I realise it’s a late as he’ll reply. But thanks for writing anyway :)

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Author-sama, you really are evil by not ending the relationship until the end... :C

Smut or not, you perfectly aced their personalities! And this is completely believable as to their ages. You know a good story by how easy it is to picture it in your mind, can you hear the dialogue in your head, can you imagine the room they're in, see the books on the shelves, the candles glowing. Bloody hell! This played in my head just like a video! Magnificently done, BRAVO!

nice!

This was good!

Scene of looking at each other is vaguely similar to that in Imperiussed (story id:13963318), though that is not a PWP.

Loved this one-shot, wish this became more then a one-shot.

Loved this! I wish there was more

Love

Enjoyed this.