Reviews for A Boy and His Cloak
Harrypotterfan chapter 1 . 6/5
This was delightful, I would love for you to make another one where they actually do have sex :) good job!
Bully bob johnsu chapter 1 . 5/26
Keep going, be nice for some actual sex
Guest chapter 1 . 4/20
Made me cream my panties did this! Ms Adventure
Hermione Potter chapter 1 . 4/2
Please, oh please do more. This was absolutely amazing, do more please. :)
batmanhasmyback chapter 1 . 3/31
I loved it
Guest chapter 1 . 3/25
Amazing story. It's so realistic and you avoid cliches and make everything seem possible like Harmony might actually have happened in the books. Really well done.
Probably the best written Harmony one shot.
mieze0105 chapter 1 . 3/20
WOW, really great story. One of the best ff smuts i've read so far. It makes me (almost) ship Harmione. It's a very believable and gentle Erotica
SuperCocoLoco chapter 1 . 3/13
Guest chapter 1 . 3/2
h0neybunny16 chapter 1 . 2/24
it gave me chills. I love it :D
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21
Dogniss Everdeen chapter 1 . 2/19
This was very interesting but satisfying nonetheless
Pikachu chapter 1 . 2/15
Amazing, more!
Max chapter 1 . 2/13
Wow, that was simple wonderful, thank you! You really captured their characters well and created a believable, very sensual and erotic experience between the two! Really feels like the lost/cut chapter of the adult-edition of the novel ;) Only one minor thing: As another reviewer pointed out, they both grew up as muggles, so they wouldn't call to Merlin or something like that. Would love to read how it continues, but it is a good round story on its own already!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/6
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