|Reviews for Bruised|
| madgeundersee05 chapter 12 . 1/8/2017
This is amazing! I cried with what had happened to Rian. Please update this one. I cannot wait to know what will happen to Rian and Sirius.
| Dumbledore's got style chapter 3 . 9/18/2015
| Maya chapter 12 . 5/26/2015
Omg this is a really good fanfic so update it's 2015 now!
| PhoenixSong2013 chapter 5 . 11/13/2013
I love it! :)
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/20/2013
PLS CONTIUNE the story it's good
| ShipsThatFly chapter 12 . 7/27/2013
Good writing overall, definitely kept me on my toes. Mack and his pals are mental, to say the least.
A few parts were a bit weird, like how a quidditch captain and at least 4 wizards couldn't subdue one muggle, or how Rian's mates somehow knew she was in trouble. (Wished for more elaboration on that part)
The bits with Rian and Sirius were cute!(:
| Scoutbabe chapter 12 . 7/1/2013
Wow this is an amazing story i love it. I know that might sound so odd that someone loves a story about being physically, sexually and mentally abused but it's just so fascinating
| xbamsod chapter 12 . 5/23/2013
Its been about three years now. I hope that you still plan on updating this story instead of leaving it dead. I really like reading this story and I would love to read more.
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/19/2013
this fic was absolutely beautiful
you captured the pain that i think so many people deal with, the feeling of not being giid enough. u also showed the best love story i have read so far on this site, so original and breath taking. i hope that u didnt actually experience the abuse that rian went through but u wrote it so beautifully that i understand the hurting a little bit more. u have made the world better with this fic god bless u.
| ksrules43 chapter 12 . 1/12/2013
Hey, great story. I just wanted to remind you to update, since it seems you haven't done so in quite some time and I'm dying to see how this story ends.
| unknown player chapter 12 . 1/7/2013
really nice so far.
point though! I mean, Derek was Quidditch Captain, right? didnt know Gideon and Fabian, but knew the Marauders. which is weird because with the way the two behave, he should know them, right? Just a point :P
I kinda feel that things moved too fast with Sirius and Rian. Or maybe it's just because of the screen time lol
I love the "playlist", btw :D
minor gram erros and typos sighted. really minor.
and it's weird how witches/wizards/a quidditch captain cant hold off a muggle in the bar fiasco :-/ it got me a bit confused.
but generally, I love the fic :D it's different. and i love your style of writing too.
is this fic about to end, though? coz I cant think of any more events that can take place (unless yknow, Mack makes a debut again? i dunno) but yeah, update soon, anyway :D
| kashno2 chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
| Anonymous-xox chapter 12 . 8/15/2012
I loved that last chapter, especially at the end when they both accept each other. So sweet, I really hope you start updating again, this is too good of a story to abandon.
| jlol00 chapter 12 . 7/15/2012
I'm still waiting for an update!
I want you to finish this story already!(;
| AliceinWonderland13 chapter 12 . 6/16/2012
i love this story sooooooo much ! please update soon!