|Reviews for Whirlpools Of Lightning|
| V chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
Most retarded premise I've ever seen. Short of Iwa, Kumo is the absolute last place Kushina would ever go. They tried to kidnap her, just like they did Hinata, as a child. That was how she fell in love with Minato, when he rescued her from Kumo nin. She might as well have gone to seek aid from Akatsuki for all the fucking sense this makes.
| soul18 chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
make more chapters.
| green lanterns light chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
i hope you make another chapter soon i really like were this story is going
| quinton klokateer 666 chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
make another chapter
| EdStargazer chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
An interesting story concept. You got off well with a solid idea. The story could be worth reading if you continue.
You might want to consider having someone proof read your work. Your grammar, sentance structure and spelling were sloppy. It was not to the point of confusing a reader but someone looking for such things would pass up your story.
| lindon2 chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
| Takai-taka chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
Not bad for the first chapter a little short then what i normally read.A chapter that is short is still sweet if done right and that's what this 't wait for the next chapter to come out.