|Reviews for TPAP Extra 1 Will You, Nil You|
| ArcadianMaggie chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
Thanks for the wonderful outtake! It brought a smile to my face and really made me miss TPAP. Loved "Did you or did you not once tell me I should wander around in boxers all day?" and of course, "Shut up, mom." What a treat.
| PLV chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
Thanks for writing it. It was great-D
| Aurabee chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
I absolutely adore this Edward & Bella and you!
I just caught a staging of The Taming of the Shrew here in DC a month or so ago. It's fun to replay it in my head with your E & B and the others.
| Melolabel chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
Very cute! So perfect for Mike to propose that way!
| Ivygirl702 chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
I've missed being inside this Edward's head. You [and he] didn't disappoint!
"Can I borrow a kidney?" I joke.
"You know it's four to six weeks without sex for me after the surgery," she retorts with a smile. "Still want one?"
"No thanks, I'm good. I'll just put an ad on Craigslist or something," I say, shuddering at the thought of a drought like that.
Thank you for sharing this story with us...
| ciaobella27 chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
I love your twisted mind. So much. I tell everyone who will listen that opening night in TPAP is one of the funniest things I ever read. I can't believe you managed to match that.
My favorite part was Jessica's mom yelling from the audience. I had such a headache when I was reading and I started to laugh and cough and was one big mess by the end. So worth it!
Plus, I had "Joe Lies" from Say Anything in my head all night.
| wisdomous chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
i will never be able to get enough of the TPAP crew. thank you mujisan for sharing your outtake with us!
| StarryNightT chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
LOL! Win. I'm kinda sad Edward didn't think of it first too... But then again I wouldn't change his proposal for anything. :)
| DeeDreamer chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
Adorable! Fun! A treat!
| none000-none chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
Was fun to see these two again- I missed them! Just realized that I've somehow never seen this play performed(just read it)- going to have to try to remedy that. Thanks to Susie for fronting the cash for this endeavor & letting us all enjoy it and thanks to you for writing the good stuff:) ~larac
| blackdogs chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
I can't even tell you how happy I am to get a little glimpse into your B&E's lives. Your dynamic duo make me all happy and smiley. It's pathetic, really.
You know what else is pathetic? The sound I made when I read the Say Anything reference. "They're all about you. They're all about pain." Did you catch the Lloyd Doblers in NYC? /photos/say-anything-lloyd-dobler-mob/
| Raewright chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
"Shut up, mom," Loved it!
| kmm122 chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
I loved this outtake, I've missed these two!
| darcy13 chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
This is spectacular on so many levels that I'm just stunned.
I studied The Taming of the Shrew in grad school and debated it to no end. I must say that I agree with your Edward, "I win, she wins, we win - because we work together." Shakespeare may have indeed been a feminist (or knew how to woo half of his audience).
Beautifully and intelligently done-as always! I swoon when reading.
| sophie921 chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
"Say yes!" someone in the audience screeches. "Shut up, mom," Jessica snarls. Then she turns her eyes back up to Mike's. "Okay," she mutters. "Here's what we're going to do. We're going to pretend this proposal didn't happen. You'll take me out to dinner on Monday and do it then. With a ring. On your knee, like a normal person."
"I can live with that," Mike nods. "So, we're good?"
Oh, that Mike! What a devil with his smooth ways and glib tongue...Priceless!
Thanks for the high entertainment!