|Reviews for Western Skies|
| LilyLunaEtheline chapter 6 . 8/21
Just wanted to let you know that I really love your story. I love the relationship between all the characters, and I really love all the Chris/John stuff. The idea of a Jim with wings is such a good one - it's massively got inside my head, I keep thinking about it, and what a great premise it is xx
| w- easy enough chapter 6 . 7/19
hahaha! Love Scotty. Galia is great. I love this story!
| CallToMuster chapter 6 . 3/2
I SUPER LOVE THIS STORY! I love it even more now that everyone knows that Jim has wings. The only thing I don't like is the Kirk/Bones, but I'll live.
| BlueMoonChaos chapter 6 . 1/18
Please write more! Want some extra Bones/Kirk fluffiness, and to actually see them really together! Loved the story and you have wonderfully long chapters. Please say that you're planning to add more, even though it's been so damn long since the last update.
| Andromeda chapter 4 . 9/4/2014
I made the best, most perfect mistake ever, and that was listening to "Hinnom, tx" by Bon Iver for the part where Jim took Chris to see the sunset from up in the sky.
The song fit in PERFECTLY and now I'm crying. I suggest to everyone else to listen to that song when u get to that part, the imagery is absolutely stunning.
| bluecrystal angel chapter 6 . 8/31/2014
Wow I cannot say how much I love this series! I first found it on LJ but was too impatient to wait for the next part so read it right through here :p I can't wait to see where you take it next and seriously hope you are continuing it ! I think I've found a new obsession too I'm officially a shipper of Kirk and bones ;) your portrayal of all the character was amazing and more accurate then I usually read which I think shows amazing talent :) I liked the fact that you put pike and archer in too and I seriously hope they come out of denial soon lol one question though are you going to put into darkness in it ?
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/25/2014
the rest of the entire story will be coming i do hope
| sparkreader chapter 6 . 7/25/2014
Have you abandoned this story or do you plan to return to it?
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/26/2014
Wow, what an amazing story! Please continue?
| WrenWeir chapter 6 . 4/10/2014
I really love this story :) I you have luck getting back into the writing. I love the characterizations and the dialog and everything :)
| Elaine du Lac chapter 6 . 3/28/2014
LOL! That ending was uber funny! I love this part with Jim outing himself and the media. Great timing for the wing-outing. I totally approve of that plot decision. The scene where Jim faces the media noise for the first time is beautiful. I hate it sometimes when I read about Jim's more fragile side in this story. It feels a bit trite to me because I've encountered a certain kitsch stereotype of the fragile. beautiful, slightly effeminate young man who eats like a bird (pun intended LOL) (this occurs a lot in Harry Potter fandom in regards to Harry himself), has people worry about his eating habits, tends to get attacked by big, gay men, etc. But despite what I say, this actually occurs in only very, very tiny amounts in this story. Too little to be visible to any but the most veteran of fanfic readers I guess and the most scrutinizing.
In general, your Kirk seems well balance in weaknesses and strength. You give him moments of weaknesses and moments where he shows his mettle (but those moments are fewer than what I would have liked- yeah I'm a super!Kirk fan, converted by AngelBaby1). He isn't quite OOC, just enough to reflect a Kirk brought up with the love and care of Pike and who has the burden of hiding a big secret. Yeah, this Kirk has a lot more insecurities and fears than the nu!Kirk and the TOS Kirk. (But he's also received more love than nu!Kirk it seems.)
Looking forward to the next chapter. As Spock Prime told the younger Spock: "Good Luck" in your endeavors.
| wolfsrainrules chapter 5 . 3/26/2014
Ok...I dont think you understand what youve done to me.
The level of...of...perfection here...just GAH.
But I also found 2 songs that just REALLY REALLY spoke to me for THIS story. Ive loved the band for a while but this...this just...they fit. So I wanted to share. Who knows. They may spark some inspiration. Please enjoy.
The first is Help by Hurts
The 2nd is Heaven by Hurts.
| kasey123 chapter 6 . 2/5/2014
| rebel lion75 chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
I literally love this story so much :D
the guy with wings in x-men was always a quiet favourite of mine :) xxx
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/13/2013
more coming, right?