Reviews for The Beauty Within
sub0chick chapter 9 . 11/21/2011
awww, that was a great retelling and you worked little harry in there perfectly. have to wonder what adam's going to think about his little love going back to england when he's older though. wonderful work!
Shadow Wolf 15846 chapter 9 . 11/12/2011
loved it...will there be sequel?
Tadpoleinateacup chapter 9 . 11/1/2011
this was adorable and well written! I thought the end was a little rushed, it could have used an epilogue but overall it was wonderfully wonderful1
Atlaxxxx chapter 9 . 9/4/2011
I kinda wish there was one more chapter. Just like an epilogue or something, kind of a closing. Like, do Belle and Gaston end up together? Does Harry go to Hogwarts? That kind of thing. Just a suggestion, though the story was great :D
KarmaLovingFanfic chapter 9 . 8/30/2011
I love this story, this is my 4th time reading it. I saw you are reposting it and I hope you don't get rid of this version because it is really good!
DawnScarlet19610 chapter 9 . 8/11/2011
the story had a good idea, but i didnt like 's age was a bit off, and he was a bit too welcoming to harry. i didnt like gaston at all. you made him more than an arrogant bastard. also, belle was kinda out of character. im glad that youre rewriting it, because it has so much potential. like harry being older and the beast truly falling in love. i didnt lie the end scene with the beast changing back in the entrance hall during a fight. i like your other one better and look forward to you updating soon.
Cosmos Angel and Yami Darkness chapter 9 . 6/26/2011
Nice keep going
hullohullo chapter 9 . 6/25/2011
NOOOOOOOOOO! I want mooooore! You're stories are like always Awesome!
EmmaRandomAs chapter 9 . 6/21/2011
awwwww! such a cute and awesome story, i love it! congrats on a job well done!
In The Mix chapter 9 . 6/16/2011
This story did make me smile. I wish there were a sequel or at least an epilouge to accompany it.
Make war not love. war is fun chapter 9 . 6/12/2011
cute story
Sapphire Nymph chapter 9 . 5/30/2011
oh my gosssh. At first, i was hesitant to read this. but now? gosh, my heart is drowning in the fluffiness, my eyes are tearing up and my lips are forever curved into this goofy grin.

KYAAAAAA!
Cordiss chapter 9 . 5/27/2011
Ok so first of all I loved the story. It was very sweet, but am I missing something? Did there used to be more chapters? To me this really doesn't really warrant the M rating. I also see reviews for chapters further than 9. Did you edit it shorter? Was just wondering. It is lovely as is, though the ending is a bit abrupt.
arwin-urban chapter 9 . 5/24/2011
For a short time, I thought you were going to let the Beast and Belle be together, I was really freaking out. But I liked it! Very cute!
Qazol chapter 9 . 4/1/2011
It did make me smile.

:)

Thank you so much for writing!
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