Reviews for Kite
debslmac chapter 1 . 8/8/2015
poor Bella...
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2014
What a piece of shit! He doesn't deserve you Bella. Go be a strong woman and prove to him he doesn't matter. He didn't bring you down!
blue125 chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
I really loved this story. It has so much potential. Please please consider expanding it.
Los Grotos chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
I think this really has potential to become something that I'll forsake Calculus hw for. (I'm a Calc major)
left in bits chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
I really liked this.
MeikianaDarko chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
What can I say? I totally dig your Twi stories! This is a perfect one shot and I love how you handled it.
olwils chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
Well I don't know about anyone else, but I'd like to read what happens next if you decide to continue with this. Who's the blonde guy and is Bella gonna kick Edward's butt are just a few of the things I'm curious about. Thanks for writing! :)
radiate689 chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
Interesting...great start
avd chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
I really liked this, it worked well as a one shot but would be just as good If continued. Your writing is really good.