|Reviews for After Breakfast|
| Captain Mandar chapter 1 . 1/28
Beautiful! I absolutely love this story. I almost cried a couple times. I loved Harry's speech it was magnificent and so was Ron's and 's. I love that you had all the Hogwarts people there and especially McGonagall being there it never would have occurred to me that she would be there but now that I think about it I realize she would be along with Harid and Kingsley. I love how you wrote Harry, Hermione, Ron, Ginny, Arthur, Molly, George, Percy, Charlie, Luna, McGonagall and all the rest I may have forgot to name. Over all I just really love this fic. And I'm really wishing for a Harry/Ginny wedding with an Arthur, and Ron speech.
| 17 Hope chapter 1 . 1/8
This was a brilliant story. I've never understood why so many people hate Ron - I personally love his funny, cute and brave personality. I hate it when people forget what he's done because sure there were some things like leaving during DH but he was the one that almost killed himself at 12 during the chess game. You've captured these sorts of things beautifully and I really love it. I also like how he needs to be prompted during his speech and the references to a famous person doing the wedding speech were so good. Harry's speech was brilliant and made me. All up it was an incredible fic.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Abosultely beautiful- I really, really loved this little one-shot, great job!
| Amanda Pall chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
Now you need to do ron's speech for Harry's wedding!
| nayin17 chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
loved this and im patiently waiting for harry/ginny's wedding
| mellpell chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
You made me cry! Which is good. What a wonderful seen that you captured, very heartfelt and a nice reminiscence of Ron and Hermione finding each other. Well done :-)
| Lokken.8 chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Nice little (well, not so little) story. I think you got it about right! Well done!
| Isilarma chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
I love this. Ron's speech was great; I can just see Hermione having to prompt him, and I really liked Harry's best man speech. Ron is so under-rated in fanfiction, so it's really good to see Harry telling everyone, including Ron, just how important he is. All the characterisations were perfect, I really liked the glimpses of Harry and Ginny's relationship, and it was written very well.
| rskanumuri chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Tears in the eyes as i type this..
| ClaireBear1982 chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
This was lovely. I really loved all the speeches, Harry's was so funny and really very sweet, and most of all so true. A brilliant job done :)
| wickedcml chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Awesome story! It really moved me especially Harry's comments about Ron. I've seen comments made about Hermione would never stay with Ron because of her brilliant mind and that Ron is an idiot. They miss the fact that while he was not big on studying and waited for the last minute to do home work he received his OWLS on his own merit. As Harry said he is also brave, generous, clever, funny and I will add protective of those he loves. So I will definitely raise my glass to Ron and Hermione and to you for a wonderful story.
| adp1222 chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
The ending of your story brought tears to my eyes. I love Ron & I don't understand the hate he receives in some stories. He's flawed but that's real & that's what I really like about him. I decided to come check out your stories after reading 'Angelina' and read some of the reviews. Great Job
| addictedheartache chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
| amba gurl chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
oh this was so good! i loved it :D
| WitchHex chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
What a beautiful story! I have always wondered why fanfictioners seem to hate Ron; and I think in this story, you have captured exactly what I like about the dynamics between Harry, Ron, and Hermione. It's almost like reading JKR's work! I commend you on that!
I can't exactly think of any constructive criticism, as everything in this story seemed well-crafted and sound.
Except for this: 'Ladies and Gentlemen,' he said again,
Perhaps gentlemen is supposed to be lowercase? I could be wrong, and probably am :)
I am now highly interested in what Ginny has to say? In Hermione's 'traditional English wedding' would she have a speech as well? Perhaps you could expand on this story elsewhere. Just a thought.
I'm eagerly awaiting updates from many of your stories, and would like to say that you are a very gifted writer of fanfiction, and I'm somewhat curious as to what you could do with your own original work! Well done, and please keep writing!