|Reviews for Chasing Paper|
| Boston Blondie chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Wow, that was so good! I'm so glad Becci told me to go find this :-) I can't wait to read the rest - Lisa
| Here's Where the Story Ends chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
OH HAI, I'm reviewing YOU! This is awesome. Because I love you.
So this is what I love about reading someone I know well. I can HEAR you. Like this:
"It was Tuesday and I'm pretty sure Tuesday was dealing with a raging case of PMS. I must say, I expect more from you, Tuesday; this kind of thing is typical from Monday, but you usually come through for me. Not this Tuesday though, and I thought about holding a grudge because of it."
I could literally hear you saying this.
I also love the way you describe things, so that I see them. "The rain was falling in a hard steady rhythm outside and we were grateful that we hadn't waited on the street for him. Patrons poured into the dining area, all shaking off the rain water and running fingers through their hair in an attempt to tame the damage the weather had done. " So visual.
Salt and Vinegar chips are fucking delicious. js.
A symbiotic food relationship is very important. *nods*
GAH, they had a drunken college hookup? Hmm, this sounds like something that happens to a lot of friends in college ;)
Oh, so this is the piggyback Boo talks about. I'm with Boo. Team Jasper. Eff Edward. Don't hold me to this, I'm fickle.
""Hey Bella, do you ever wonder…" his blue eyes caught my brown ones.
"Sometimes," I replied softly.
"And do you ever think about that night?" he asked.
"More than I should," I whispered.
We stared at each other for a moment, our breath visible in the cold night air. The unsaid words hung in the air, swirling around us. Who knows what things would have been like if we had zigged instead of zagged. We were where we were and who we were because of the choices we had made. We didn't need to find the answers to those questions, the unspoken words"
Keeling me a little. Okay a lot. ALREADY. ILY.
| readingismypassion4 chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
| Mackenzie L chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
Very nice. :) Hopefully will find time soon to check out the continuation...
| Alby Mangroves chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
So, apologies first off that it has taken me so long to get here, I always meant to but it's taken a little longer than it should!
I love your day references, each one with a personality of its own, and I find myself fascinated as to where this could go; it's quite charming and... um, expectant? Like a note played and left hanging in mid-air.
| Hev99 chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
Ooh I never read this before HTE! Aah the memories of that first chapter! I love love LOVE the whole blaming the days of the week thing that runs through it! The first paragraph is a masterclass in humerous writing! I LOVE it! I realise I've basically read it before, but by the time I realised that I was beyond the first paragraph and I couldn't help myself!
You Genius! I hope that you have plans to write a novel someday cos I would love to have something you've written on my bookcase one day! :D
| Debbie in S. Florida chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Okay, I already read the first chapter of your story, Chasing Paper, and came back to read this for the backstory. Very good! I would've insisted you write more if I'd read it back when you first wrote it, so I'm really glad I've read it now, when you've already written a lot! I'm off to continue the story, as it completely intrigued me, and now, after reading this, I can't wait!
| awesomenessisme chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Aw, so cute! By the end I was wishing that Jasper and Bella were together :D
| mrsjs chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
This was so lovely and I'm anxious to find out what happens next with these two.
"Hey, Tuesday day? You might want to grab the notes from Tuesday night because he just saved your ass." - very funny
Salt and vinegar chips. Yum. Thanks for writing!
| rameau chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
Always the gentleman. My favourite kind Jasper.
The story somehow seems bigger than this little one shot, it's almost like a diary entry where she writes down everything that happened and what to remember only lingering on the few moments that stood out. And I feel robbed for not having seen everything.
Just makes me ask countless of questions like what fuelled their cowardice and avoidance in the first place. What stopped and still does prevent them from taking chances? Aren't they too young to settle? Without at least trying to reach the stars and lasso the moon?
Is this the story you've continued? I just might have to make time for it.
| Wonderwallthefirst chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
Really very good. Off to read the continuation.
| Chicklette chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
Yikes! I was really biting my nails, wondering if you were going to have Jasper and Bella leave Alice and Edward. Although I am a Jella shipper royale, it's hard for me to imagine a world where that happens!
Thank you so much! This was really beautifully done. Who doesn't have one of those "what could have been" relationships lurking around in their past?
Great job! Thank you!
| eden's garden chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
yes! continue, this was so cool! i know i sound lame "cool" but it was i love Jasper Bella fics when they're well written and this one was PRO!
'sunday, a little help here" awesome!
| LaViePastiche chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
aw i loved this it was awesome. and yes i would recommend continuing it and of course j and b need to get together because clearly they are in love!
you covered a lot of ground in this but the pacing was awesome - it wasn't too long but we got everything we needed to know to get invested in the characters and the story. no wasted words here. great job.
Hey, Tuesday day? You might want to grab the notes from Tuesday night because he just saved your ass.
cracked me up :)
| maiken m chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
please please continue this is gett n intresting please im begging