Reviews for Summer And Dillion My Hero Is You
isabella oliver chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
write a chapter with Kimberley the a chapter on all of them including tenaya come together and are a family again
blueimmortal chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
There are too many run-on sentences. From what I could barely read, it looks interesting.
ZhaneZeo chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
nice story! cute! again mayeb start a paragraph whn someone talks or a new idea...the paragraphs are a little hard to read because they're big...not to sound mean just trying to help! again good job
nolechic512 chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
ok. um. wow. im sorry, but you have got so many errors, that i dont even know what you were talking about. soo. please, use spell check. not trying to be a witch, but im just saying. you should go over your story and fix your errors, because its missing words, and as far as i could read, it looks interesting. trust me your not alone on the typos. anyway... besides the errors, good job.
anyabar1987 chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
from what I could make out of your story it seemed pretty good though you could do with a little revision and editing to make complete sentences and proper paragraphs.