Reviews for Malcolm's Accident
lieutenant spark chapter 5 . 3/5/2010
aw to cute
iretr chapter 5 . 1/23/2010
It was awsome yo!
Fishyqueen chapter 5 . 1/13/2010
that was really good
KHwhitelion chapter 4 . 11/6/2009
The end?

XD

With such short chapters, you could have made this whole thing a one-shot :P

But I'm guilty of short chapters myself XD

Nice happy ending!
Safira Rue Mellark chapter 2 . 11/5/2009
really good, but too many run-on setences.
KHwhitelion chapter 2 . 11/5/2009
...too lazy to log in...

_ Now everything's bold?

Sorry I'm really picky.

Hm...poor Malcolm this doesn't look good.
KHwhitelion chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
...too lazy to log in...

Hi there!

Just wanna say I like where your story is going. However, I think you should change the format: hit the enter bar after each piece of dialogue, and create new paragraphs. I think you'll get more readers that way.

Sometimes the formatting of a story is enough to turn a reader away.

Which is a shame-it's nice to see some angst/tragedy stories that aren't about Reese. I'm working on one for Francis myself, but Malcolm's fun too :P